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My grandma influence me a lot. influence用原型肯定不对，奶奶健在吗？在的话用三单，不然用过去式或现在完成时，现在完成好些。I have spend （spent 过去分词）a lot of time with my grandma and grandpaEven longer than the time I （have）spent with my parents.My grandma taught me that I should never lie to the person(单数好奇怪，只有一个人爱你？要不改成anyone吧 任何一个人) who loves me and (that这个不能省)I shouldn't be afraid to meet challenges.My typeface is like her (hers)我的字体像她的（字体）。这样才对，你的字体难道能像奶奶这个人？？好多错误，先回答下，再慢慢改，你的时态和动词运用有点弱啊 because she （加had）taught me to write before I went to primary school. 过去的两个动作有明显的前后顺序，前面那个最好用过去完成时。 I was afraid of swimming 你一直把afraid当动词用了？？它是形容词啊She also encouraged me to take part in school activities.she said she is（was） proud of me.My grandma has influenced me a lot.She was a teacher before her（改成she） retired but she is always a teacher in my life.

Good morning.I'm glad to be here to introduce myself. My name is Shang Yun, and I am a seventeen year's old girl. I'm from China and studying in Luqiao High School. My interests include swimming in summer, playing the piano and reading novels. And I also like listening to music in my spare time. I'm a warm-harted girl who likes helping people and making friends. I'm fond of traveling and attracted to different cultures. I've been hoping to travel around the world since I was a little girl. I feel lucky to be here and I really want to show the good qualities of our nation to the world. Please give me the opportunity to make my dream become true by allowing me to go to Germany. Please believe that I'm the most suitable candidate and choose me! That's all, thank you. (You did a good job already. Hope you can get it. Good luck!)

正确的句子如下：1. My uncle gave me a MP4 as my birthday gift.2. He joined the army 20 years ago and never returned.3. His sister married a rich man.4. He made a big mistake, and as a result, lost his job.5. Mary's parents could hardly afford the medical care.6. I plan to visit the Great Wall next month.7. A great many of children cannot go to school in poor areas.8. I want to see him the minute he arrives.9. We need to discuss the report today.10. I saw a tall man enter our office.11. The number of people who lost homes reached as many as 250000.12. They began to grow corn, a plant that can not grow well in dry regions.13. The Chinese diet is a little bit different from the British diet.14. People all over the world are now beginning to learn English.15. Thick trees and green grass could be seen everywhere.

seventeen-year-old girl.I have some interests such as swimming in summer,playing the piano and reading novels.I'm a warm-harted girl who like making friends. aware of different customs.I have always been dreaming of traveling around the world since I was a little girl.As a Chinese girl,I'm patriotic and really want to show the good qualities of our nation to the world.I am longing for the chance to go to Germany.