宇晨yuchen
Located in Nanping County, Aba Tibetan-Qiang Autonomous Prefecture, Jiuzhaigou Ravine stretches 80 kilometers in one direction and takes up an area of more than 60,000 hectares. The area consists of six scenic spots——Changhai, Jianyan, Nuorilang, Shuzheng, Zharu and Heihai. It becomes a world renowned scenic spot because of its diversity in natural scenery which includes snowy peaks, double waterfalls, colorful forests and green sea. Furthermore, Tibetan customs are another attraction. It was listed as a world heritage site in 1992. The Ravine boasts a number of unique features. The mountains, lakes, natural primeval forest, beautiful flowers all make Jiuzhaigou a fairyland. Mountains ranging 1,980 to about 3,100 meters in height are covered by a variety of trees and plants such as green conifers, luxuriant broadleaf trees and colorful rare flowers and grasses. Scenes change according to the season and the area is particularly colorful in autumn when the wind makes kilometers of tree belt along the lake undulate like a sea wave. Waterfalls, lakes, springs, rivers and shoals add to color and the green trees, red leaves, snowy peaks and blue skies are reflected from lakes and rivers. Trees grow in the water and flowers blossom in the middle of lakes.The Shuzheng Scenic Spot is one of the central point of Jiuzhaigou's landscape. With 40 lakes which extend five kilometers along a valley, the spot covers an area of three square kilometers. The lakes vary in color according to their depths, residues and scenery around them. Among which, Reed Lake is an ideal habitat of birds; Spark Lake appears to move while the jade-like Rhinoceros Lake is a good place for rowing, swimming and rafting. There are also the Shuzheng Waterfalls which have a backdrop of trees.Nuorilang Scenic Area extends from the Nuorilang Waterfalls to Zhuhai, an area of three square kilometers. The 320-meter-wide Pearl Beach Waterfall and the Five-Color Lake which has a richly colored underwater landscape.The Sword-Shaped Rock Scenic Area consists of Goose Lake, Suspended Springs, Sword Rock, snow-covered Mountains and primeval forests. Sometimes you can see giant pandas. There is also the 17.8-kilometer Zechawa Ravine, the longest and highest in Jiuzhaigou. At the end of it is the eight-kilometer-long Changhai Lake, the largest in the area. In Haizi there is a Five-Color Pond, the brightest lake in Jiuzhaigou.Undoubtedly, the magnificent view in Jiuzhaigou will make you reluctant to leave, and don't forget that the autumn is the best season to visit it.
阿甘终结者
写作思路：选取一个景点，把它的形态和特色介绍出来。
greatest building project in human history of civilization.
中国的长城是人类文明史中最伟大的建筑工程。
It was built in Spring and Autumn period ，Warring states times, two thousand years ago.
长城建造于两千年前的春秋战国时代。
After the Qin state unified China. The chinese people connected the Great wall of various states.
秦国统一中国后，中国人把各个战国的长城连接起来。
Two generations of wise people have constructed The Great Wall intensively. Vast its project. It looks like rainbow rolling forward. It was possible to be called world miracle.
聪明的两代人曾经密集地建造长城，扩展了它的工程. 它看起来象彩虹，滚滚向前. 它有可能被称作世界奇迹。
It is the must for chinese people. When you repair Great Wall's ruins in offical days.
You will not only could witness Great Wall's apparance that meandered in the hills and high moutains , but could also understand the chinese nation creation history , great wisdom and courage of chinese people. In December 1987, Great Wall was included in ‘’World heritage Name list‘’.
它是中国必须付出的代价，当你在正式的场合下，在废墟中修建长城，你不仅会见证它在高山和峻岭中婉延曲折的情景， 也会了解中华民族的创造历史以及中国人的勇气和智慧，在1987年12月，长城被归录在‘’世界遗产名录"中。
写作文的方法：
英语作文想写好作文，必须具备扎实的基本功，作文的基本功主要体现在词、句、段三个方面。
单词方面，积累单词，扩大词汇量，弄清词的确切用法及相似词的用法区别，以及很多固定短语、习语的用法，要准确地表达想要表达的意思。
句子方面，注意一些常用的句式，平时看到比较好用的句式要记下来，多模仿，还要在写文章时注意长短句的结合。
段落方面，注意整篇文章的整体布局，要从整体上把握每段的中心思想，避免偏题、走题。
提高写作水平不是一朝一夕所能完成的，最重要的是养成好的学习习惯，平时注意多积累，勤动笔、多思考，潜移默化中写作水平便会不断提高。
告别了以前
A 800miles corridor of mountains-and-waters paiting.这里corridor是长廊的意思，而山水画的惯用语就是mountains-and-waters paiting
曾涛~家居建材
写作思路：确立中心，围绕选材，确定重点，安排详略，选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想，选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料，以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来。
greatest building project in human history of civilization.
中国的长城是人类文明史中最伟大的建筑工程。
It was built in Spring and Autumn period ，Warring states times, two thousand years ago.
长城建造于两千年前的春秋战国时代。
After the Qin state unified China. The chinese people connected the Great wall of various states.
秦国统一中国后，中国人把各个战国的长城连接起来。
Two generations of wise people have constructed The Great Wall intensively. Vast its project. It looks like rainbow rolling forward. It was possible to be called world miracle.
聪明的两代人曾经密集地建造长城，扩展了它的工程. 它看起来象彩虹，滚滚向前. 它有可能被称作世界奇迹。
It is the must for chinese people. When you repair Great Wall's ruins in offical days.
You will not only could witness Great Wall's apparance that meandered in the hills and high moutains , but could also understand the chinese nation creation history , great wisdom and courage of chinese people. In December 1987, Great Wall was included in ‘’World heritage Name list‘’.
它是中国必须付出的代价，当你在正式的场合下，在废墟中修建长城，你不仅会见证它在高山和峻岭中婉延曲折的情景， 也会了解中华民族的创造历史以及中国人的勇气和智慧，在1987年12月，长城被归录在‘’世界遗产名录"中。
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