• 回答数

    4

  • 浏览数

    221

呼伦小贝尔
首页 > 英语培训 > 汉译英文章800字

4个回答 默认排序
  • 默认排序
  • 按时间排序

极夜北极光

已采纳

我不太专业 ,不介意的话 发到我这里,

汉译英文章800字

103 评论(13)

幸福、定格

There are many Internet functions, to me, is the biggest advantage can easily check data and will not understand questions to find it out. I will use the Internet to make friends with people from all over the country. The Internet also let we can not go out and then can buy what they want, also can make us the latest movie and the latest music. In short, the Internet is our life more convenient.

256 评论(9)

云飞扬了

一、关于《愚公移山》的英译本 《愚公移山》是中国古代一个寓言故事,出自《列子·汤问》。1945年6月11日,毛泽东在中国共产党第七次全国代表大会上的闭幕词《愚公移山》中引用了这个故事,后来该闭幕词收录于《毛泽东选集》第三卷。毛泽东等领导人著作的翻译工作早在解放前就已开始。1950年3月,中宣部成立《毛泽东选集》英译委员会,徐永焕出任主任,参加翻译工作的还有金岳霖、钱锤书、王佐良等名流学者。虽然我们现在难以了解到英译《愚公移山》的主要执笔者是谁,但是有一点不可否认,英译《毛泽东选集》凝聚了当时国内最高水平翻译家的智慧和心血。二、从句法角度赏析《愚公移山》的英译本 多年来,笔者把《毛泽东选集》第三卷中《愚公移山》的寓言故事部分作为英译汉练习。并从每次讲评学生译文中体味原译在语言运用上的精妙之处,而原译中的句法更是独具匠心,达到游刃有余的境界。下面,笔者从句法角度对《愚公移山》的英译本逐句加以赏析,再现翻译名家们高超的语言运用能力(《愚公移山》原文和译文均摘自‘毛主席语录(汉英对照)》)。1.中国古代有个寓言,叫做“愚公移山”。【译文】There is all ancient Chinese fable called“The Foolish Old Man Who Removed the Mountains”.【赏析】①译文的句子主干为there be结构,利用过去分词called修饰fable,非常简练。②如果在called之前加whichwas或which is,虽然符合语法,但是显得累赘。2.说的是古代有一位老人,住在华北,名叫北山愚公。【译文】lt tells of an old man who lived in northern China long.10ng ago and was known as the Foolish Old Man of North Mountain.【赏析】①译文中的Ittellsof常用于介绍故事梗概。例如,“有个故事讲的是一个贫穷潦倒的书生爱上一个出身书香门第的美丽小姐”可译为“A story tells of a poverty-stricken scholar falling in love with a beautiful maiden from a literary family”。②译文利用关系代词who引导的形容词从句修饰anoldman,并且通过并列连词and把lived和was known连起来,结构自然、流畅。3.他的家门南面有两座大山挡住他家的出路,一座叫做太行山,一座叫做王屋山。【译文】His house faced south and beyond his doorway stood the two great peaks,Taihang and Wangwu,obstructing the way.【赏析】①译文没有把“他的家门南面”译成地点状语in the south of his house,避免重复使用there be句型。②译文把beyond his doorway提前,利用倒装结构很自然地引出主体“两座大山”。并且把“一座叫做太行山,一座叫做王屋山”译成同位语,十分简练。一位成绩不错的学生曾将此句译为“Two great mountains in the south of his house obstructed his way to the outSide.One is called Mount Tamang and the other Mount Wangwu”,虽然语言上没什么问题,但总觉得有些像口译,缺乏笔译的神韵。4.愚公下决心率领他的儿子们要用锄头挖去这两座大山。【译文】Witlh great determination,he led his sons in digging up these mountains hoe in hand.【赏析】①译文中没有把“下决心”译成decided to,而是译成介词词组with great determination,突出英语“静态”的语言特点。另外,把With great determination置于句首,一是强调,二是平衡句子结构。②译文中hoe in hand是独立主格结构,形象地再现了当时的情景。如果译成with hoes,则太强调hoes这类挖山工具的本身了。事实上,hoeinhand中的hoe和hand都使用单数形式,就是要描述一幅虽抽象却不失整体的画卷。试区别two books in his right hand(他右手拿着两本书)和book in hand(手里拿着书),两者的意境是不一样的。5.有个老头子名叫智叟的看了发笑,说是你们这样干未免太愚蠢了,你们父子数人要挖掉这样两座大山是完全不可能的。【译文】Another greybeard,known as the Wise Old Man,saw them and said defisively,"How silly of you to do this!lt is quite impossible for you few to dig up these two huge mountains."【赏析】①译文中known as the Wise OldMan是一个过去分词,作为插入成分修饰another greybeard,既简练又地道。②译文把原文中的间接引语处理成直接引语,符合译入语的语言习惯,更显生动。⑨译文中的few是you的同位语。few的增加非常妙,突出了主题。试想,如果没有few,虽然内容上差不多,但效果差之千里。6.愚公回答说:我死了以后有我的儿子,儿子死了,又有孙子,子子孙孙是没有穷尽的。这两座山虽然很高,却是不会再增高了。挖一点就会少一点,为什么挖不平呢?【译文】The Foolish Old Man replied,”When I die,my sons will carrry on;when they die,there will be my grandsons,and then their sons and grandsons,and SO on to infinity.High as they are,the mountains cannot grow any higher and with every bit we dig,they will be that much lower.Why can't we clear them away?”【赏析】①译文中carry on很简练,无需译成continue with my work、go on with my job等。另外,and then后面省略了therewillbe,很地道。最后。toinfinity的使用可以看出译者用词的得心应手。②译文中Higll asthey are相当于Although they are high,是形容词提前的方式状语从句。译者在这里对语言的处理是有意的,一方面使句型富有变化,更重要的是通过把high提前突出主题,因为突出山之“高”才显挖山之“难”、挖山之“愚”。③对“挖一点就会少一点”多数学生的思路是使用“the morc⋯the more⋯”结构,可能译为“The morc we dig,the less high themo删ns will be.”但译文让人耳目一新,特别足修饰lower的that much正好对应于everybit,可见译者运用语言的细腻之处。7.愚公批驳了智叟的错误思想,毫不动摇,每天挖山不止。【译文】Having refuted the Wise Old Man’s wrong view,he went on digging every day,unshaken in his conviction.【赏析】①译文利用完成式的现在分词Having refuted⋯表示先后的时间关系,使句型富有变化。②unshaken in his conviction是形容词组作状语,描述主语he,前面省去being更显简练。三、结语通过赏析《愚公移山》的英译本,我们深深体会到老一辈翻译家深厚扎实的语言功底及其独具匠心的翻译技巧。翻译不仅是一种语言活动,还是一门艺术,是语言艺术的再创作。同一篇原文会有不同译文,也自然反映出译者水平的不同。要搞好翻译,必须对两种语言的句法非常了解,这是“再创作”的基础。

97 评论(12)

珊珊来了

有一天,下着很大的雨,已经过了晚饭时间了,妈妈却还没有回来。小女孩站在家门口望啊望啊,总也等不到妈妈的身影。天越来越黑,雨越下越大,小女孩决定顺着妈妈每天回来的路自己去找妈妈。她走啊走啊,走了很远,终于在路边看见了倒在地上的妈妈。她使劲摇着妈妈的身体,妈妈却没有回答她。她以为妈妈太累,睡着了。就把妈妈的头枕在自己的腿上,想让妈妈睡得舒服一点。但是这时她发现,妈妈的眼睛没有闭上!小女孩突然明白:妈妈可能已经死了!她感到恐惧,拉过妈妈的手使劲摇晃,却发现妈妈的手里还紧紧地拽着一块年糕……她拼命地哭着,却发不出一点声音……One day, there was a pouring rain. Her mother did not come back after supper time. The girl waited and waited, her mother did not appear at last. As the dusk growing darker and the rain falling heavier, she decided to look for her mom by following the way her mother went and returned everyday. She walked and walked, after a long distance walking, she found her mother was lying on the ground. She rocked her mother fiercely, but her mother showed no response. The girl thought that her mom might be too tired to wake up, so she made a pillow with her legs and let her mother rest on it to make her mom comfortable. At the very moment, the girl found her mother's eyes did not close. It suddenly began to dawn on her that her mother had already died. A great trepidation and grief overcame her, she held fast her mother's hands and kept rocking and then found her mother was still grasping a piece rice cake. She wanted to cry, but found there was no crying voice come out.

154 评论(10)

相关问答