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会的。英语六级作文会考信件类型的,书信类型的作文其实在英语考试中是很常见的考试类型。大学英语六级考试是由国家统一出题的,统一收费,统一组织考试,用来评定应试人英语能力的全国性的考试,每年各举行两次。
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1.I am sorry to write to tell you something about the equality of the food and the service in your restaurant,and I hope I can be compensated after this.第一句话千万不能错了,quality不是equality,这样的笔误要不得.this有点指代不明.修改:I am sorry to write to tell you something about the quality of the food and the service in your restaurant,and I hope I could be compensated.2.建议,we were so happy in that day+in the beginning.3.two bottles of orange,你是想说橙汁吧?two bottles of orange juice4.when the waiter got those on our table.those指代不明。改成when a waiter got what we ordered on our table5.I found one of the dish was not clean,语法错误,dish应为dishes.6.建议:so I asked the waiter to change another one中another one改成it7.but the waiter refused my requirement,适当的拽点词还是很有必要的,要不说你词汇量没跟上。8.but my husband persude me to accept it。前后时态要保持一致。persuaded me to bear it.9.but the next thing turned worse:after we had finished eating, it is about two hours,my husband felt stomache ached,and not for long,I had the same symbol.这句问题多了点。but the next thing happened turned worse: About two hours later after we finished our dinner,my husband felt stomachache,and not for long,I had the same symptom.10.so we went to the hospital,,then the doctor told us we must have had the bad and had to take some medicine which costed us about 200 dollar.这句话也问题很多,看完是一头雾水We had to go to a hospital immediately,the doctor told us we must have had bad food and then he prescribed us some medicines,which cost us about 200 dollars.11.this situation is very unpleasant,but it do not cause by us,改成This accident was quite unpleasant,and it was not caused by us.12.I hope I will be compensated,but I think the more important is that your poor service will inflect your restanrant a lot,I wish everything goes well! 改成:I hope I will obtain a certain number of compensation and your apology,otherwise I have to complain to you.What's more, I think the more important thing is that your poor service will absolutely influence the business of your restaurant a lot,and I hope you'd better do something for it.