我躲在墙角哭
建议用地道的句子翻译,效果更好。It is self-control that master your life.[强调句]Only when you control youself can you master you life.[倒装句]。
风铃结香
最常用的口语英语是:you don't tell me what to do. 可以说:I'm in charge of my life. 或者:I know what's good for my future.别用control之类的词,不适合这里使用。