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写作思路及要点：审清题目，确定中心，选择材料。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，网购已经成为人们的.热门购物方式之一，出门购物已经成为一种休闲时的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
网购的优点有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，订货不受时间、地点的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。它从订货、买货到货物上门无需亲临现场，既省时又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，网购还有许多缺点。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达手里，会感觉和实物有不一样，这就不如在商场里买到的放心。网络支付不安全，可能被偷窥，密码被盗。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收货太慢，尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了不知多少倍，毕竟买家还是要等上几天。网购也不能和亲戚朋友一起体会逛街闲聊的悠闲。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我认为网购不比逛街好，应该减少网购或加强网购的安全性。
纯情小泰伦
Some years ago,when I want to buy something,like a book,usually I will go to the shopping stores on the streets from one to another one.After a long time,I finally got the thing I wanted,However,today,when I need a phone,even a pen,I can just buy it on the computer.Yet,we all know it with the name of Online Shopping.It just mean you do not have to go out home that you can buy anything you like.That is so convinent.
猪猪侠xtt
With the development of Internet, more and more people tend to shop on the Internet. Online shopping has provided some benefits for us, but it also has some disadvantages at the same time.随着互联网的发展，越来越多的人喜欢在网上购物。网购给我们带来了一些好处，但是它同时也有一些缺点。For one thing, online shopping has brought some convenience for consumers. Instead of going one shop to another, people can choose and buy all kinds of commodities they like as long as they click the mouse gently. This is not only a better choice for the old who do not have enough energy to go outside but also a great convenience for those who have no time to go shopping in person. In addition, consumers have more choices and can do some comparison when they are shopping on the Internet. They can glance over various commodities in all shapes, sizes and colors and decided to buy or not. Furthermore, online shopping has made a great contribution to the development of express delivery industry.一方面，网上购物给消费者带来了一些方便。人们不再是逛一个个店，人们只需要轻轻点鼠标就可以选择购买他们想要的商品。这不仅对没有精力外出的老人来说是一个更好的选择，而且对那些没有时间独自出去购物的人来说也很方便。另外，消费者在网上购物的时候有更多的选择，也可以多做对比。他们可以浏览各种商品的所有型号，尺寸，颜色然后决定要不要买。另外，网上购物对快递行业的发展做出了很大的贡献。However, for another, shopping on the Internet also has some shortcomings. Firstly, those who shop on the Internet can’t try the goods before they buy. Sometimes, the real goods are not the same as the goods they see on the Internet. Secondly, some shops on the Internet are dishonest and they would not deliver the goods after paying. And if this situation happens, the consumers would find nowhere to complain and never pull out the money any longer.然而，另一方面，网上购物也有一些缺点。首先，那些在网上购物的人不能够在买之前试一下商品。有时候，食物和我们在网上看到的物品是不一样的。其次，网上有的店是不诚实的，付款后他们不会发货。如果发生了这种情况，消费者就会找不到地方抱怨，就拿不回钱了。Therefore, we should pay more attention when shopping on the Internet.因此，当我们网购的时候应该多注意。
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lulubukema
写作思路及要点：审清题目，确定中心，选择材料。
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, online shopping has become a common phenomenon in our life.
随着互联网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物已经成为我们生活中的一种普遍现象。
Here, consumers can buy almost everything they need.
在这里，消费者几乎可以买到他们所需要的一切。
Online shopping has many advantages, perhaps the most important of which is its convenience.
网上购物有很多优点，其中最重要的也许是它的便利性。
People don't have to waste a lot of energy and valuable time to choose the goods they like from one store to another.
人们不必浪费大量的精力和宝贵的时间从一家商店到另一家商店去选择他们喜欢的商品。
This is especially desirable for the elderly, patients and busy people who can't go to the store in person.
这对于不能亲自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人来说尤其可取。
However, online shopping also has its disadvantages.
然而，网上购物也有它的缺点。
The first disadvantage is that consumers can't see the goods and can't try them on in person.
第一个缺点是消费者看不到商品，也不能亲自试穿。
Sometimes, real goods may be different from what they see on the computer.
有时，真正的商品可能与他们在电脑上看到的不一样。
The second disadvantage is that some stores on the Internet are not registered.
第二个缺点是互联网上的一些商店没有注册。
After they get the money from you, they will never give you anything again.
他们从你那里拿到钱后，再也不会给你送东西了。
Once you are deceived, you will find that you have nowhere to complain.
一旦上当受骗，你会发现你无处抱怨。
