贪吃的小四
Dear Tom,It's great to receive your e-mail. Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.Yours truly,Li HuaPossible version:Dear Tom,It's great to receive your e-mail. Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty/responsibility for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it's very important for us. I will never forget the day in my life. Yours truly,Li Hua
诗诗雨天
When I think back on my early childhood, I can remember how unhappy I was. I started in a new school in Shanghai, which was surrounded by a lot of toy stores and I was fascinated, in a rather special way, by all the toys displayed in the windows. At that time I was not particularly satisfied about my life. I knew I didn’t come from a rich family and my parents could afford these toys. I often wondered why I should suffer more than other children. I always kept this in my mind and felt sad often. As time went on, I entered junior high school and became friendship with a girl at the school. She was also from a poor family, but she was happy with her life and active in everything in school. She set a good example to me. Gradually I began to take a positive attitude toward myself and my life. During this period of association with the girl, I experienced a real “grown-up”. And I got to realize, on an intellectual level, life should not be evaluated just by one’s wealth. Even now as a senior high school student, sometimes I still wonder why the enlightenment took so long. But I have finally come to know that growing up is really a self-fulfilling experience.语法绝对无错,放心抄,完全符合你的要求,这是写完后找英语老师修改了的。