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投诉信(letters of complaint)通常是写给厂家、商店、消费者协会、报界或厂家、商店的上级主管部门,揭发产品质量的低劣、服务态度的糟糕,抱怨不应出现的情况或问题等,以求得解决的信件。写投诉信要实事求是地把问题讲清楚,态度要冷静,做到有礼貌,不能恶言伤人。

当发生事故的时候,如果只是一些很快就能得到解决的小问题(比如保险、保证或是其他合同条款),一封日常投诉信就完全可以了。由于这些小问题一般不会遭到对方的反对,日常投诉信只要清楚、明了、简要就行。下面是写日常投诉信所遵循的法则:

1. 开头就提出要求。

2. 详细解释此要求的原因。

3. 结尾要表示感谢对方的合作。

英文投诉信模板

Dear_______,

I am ______ (自我介绍) .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_____.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is _______(总体介绍). In the first place,_______(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ___________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ________ (感觉)_______(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could _______(提出建议和请求), preferably ______(进一步的要求),and I would like to have this matter settled by ____(设定解决事情最后期限).

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【英语投诉信示范1】

学校受污染

【内容提示】

假如你是市一中的学生,名叫王红。你要向本市一家报刊编辑(editor)写封信,反映你校受污染的问题,呼吁有关部门采取措施,保护环境,防止污染。请你用下面的素材写100词左右的一封信。

你校位于山脚下,一条小河从旁边流过,院内树木四季常青,鲜花争艳,景色美似花园。但两年前,附近建起一家化工厂,排出大量污水、废气,造成校园污染,严重影响了师生健康。请有关部门出面解决这一问题。

Dear Sir/Madam,

Please send us a correction on part of our order WP-11.

All the items we ordered arrived in excellent condition except for one model. It you refer to our original order (see the copy attached), you will note that we requested your fluorescent desk-lamps, Model 606. However, Model 608 reached us instead. For details, please see the inspection certificate issued by the Tianjin Commodity Inspection Bureau.

Will you kindly take back those you sent out and substitute them with an equal quantity (120 items) of Model 606? We would appreciate your attention to this matter promptly.

Yours faithfully

【英语投诉信示范2】

School Polluted

No. 1 Middle School

March 5, 1997

Dear Editor,

Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by. It used to look like a beautiful garden. There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.

But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago. It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river. The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.

It's time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.

Yours ever,

Wang Hong

【写法指要】

这封信的作者用的是对比法,先写学校的地理位置和原先学校的优美环境,后写化工厂建起后对学校造成的污染,最后提请报界呼吁保护环境的问题。写得有理有据,令人信服。

英语投诉信范例

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zhenghan116

投诉信是顾客或客户为了维护自己的权利或者因为对某事不满而写的一种信。你有时可以把投诉信寄给报社,但通常你会把信寄给你所投诉公司的负责人。下面是我整理的投诉信的写作模板范文,以供大家学习参考。

示例

投诉信虽然是抱怨某事,但他的开头方式应该有礼貌,这样才能给人们一个好印象。另外一个要记住读投诉信的人未必是犯了个错误的人。

投诉信的结构

Introduction - Reason for writing the complaint

开始段: 写投诉信的原因

Main body - a. The necessary details: where you bought it, when and what the problem is. b. why you are complaining

主段: a. 一些必要的细节: 你在哪里,什么时候购买了此产品,并且此产品有何种问题。 b. 你为什么要投诉。

Conclusion - Say what you want the reader to do.

结束段: 说明你希望读到这封信的人怎么做

投诉某产品

Dear Mr. Astor

We have used your company as a supplier to our electric goods for ten years and until recently the quality of your products has always been good.

However, on 4 May 2004, we took delivery of some radios which was of extremely poor quality. Many radios were damaged. We cannot sell them to our customers.

I do hope that such a delivery will not be repeated and that your suppliers to us in the future will again be of high quality. If, however, we receive any further faulty products from you, we will be obliged to find another supplier to provider us with goods which meet our own high standards. I am sure you will be able to provide us with goods which meet our own high standards .I am sure you will be able to provide us with a satisfactory explanation.

Your sincerely

(我们公司把你们公司作为我们电器商店的供应商已经10年了。直到最近你们的产品质量一直很好。然而,我们在2004年5月4日收到的一些收音机质量极差,很多收音机坏了。我们不能可能在卖给我们的客户。我真的希望这种情况不再发生,并且希望你们将来所提供产品的质量还会提高。如果我们再收到次品,我们将不得不找另外的供应商提供满足我们高水准的产品。我确信您能给我一个满意的答复。)

Dear Ms Foster

I write regarding the recent purchase of shirt from your store on 8 May 2004.(Polite introduction - reason for writing the complaint)

I recently washed the shirt in cool water. However, when I removed the shirt from the washing machine the shirt was stretched out of shape, and no longer fits.(The facts)

I called your store yesterday and spoke to department head, Mr. Fox, who was rather rude on the phone and informed me that I am not able to get a replacement shirt as it was purchased at a reduced price. I have been a loyal customer for many years, and until this incident never had complaints. I therefore feel disappointed to be treated in such a manner.(The facts)

I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the shirt or refund my money.(Polite ending - say what you want the reader to do)

I look forward to your early reply.(Polite ending)

Your sincerely

Alan Biltong

(我写此信是关于2004年5月8日从你的商店购买的衬衫的事。我最近在冷水中清洗了衬衫。然而当我把衬衫从洗衣机里拿出来后发现衬衫伸长变了,而且不再合适了。我昨天给你们商店打了电话,与你们部门的头福克斯说了此事。福克斯先生在电话中非常粗暴并且告诉我不能换衬衫,因为我在打折的时候买的。很多年来我一直是你们忠诚的顾客,并且在这件事情发生前从未有过投诉。因此我对你们对我的方式非常失望。如果你能给我换衬衫或者退款我将非常高兴。盼望你的回函。)

投诉某种错误

Dear Sir or Madam

With reference to your invoice No. DH/600622 of 5 June 2004, we must point out that you seem to have made an error. Your invoice states that the consignment contained 300 bowls and your delivery contained only 300 bowls also, but in fact we placed the order for 500 bowls.

We should be obliged if you could investigate these matters as soon as possible and let us have your comments.

Your sincerely

(根据您2004年6月5日的装货清单(单号DH/600622)),我们必须指出您可能犯了一个错误。您的装货清单些的事300个碗,并且您发送的货物也是300个碗。但实际上我们定了500个碗。我们要求您迅速调查此事并且告知我们您的建议。)

投诉某种服务

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received while staying at your hotel during my vacation between the 1st and 5th of May.

Although your hotel is rated as a five star, I found that the rooms were not cleaned on a daily basis, and that my bed was made up only every five days.The food in the restaurant was similarly disappointing . Not only was it extremely overpriced, but the quality was very poor. I was therefore forced to have to eat out in local restaurants.

I trust you will take my complaints seriously, and make every effort to improve your service in the future. I would also greatly appreciate a discount on my bill(receipt enclosed).

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully

(我些此信表达我对5月1日至5日度假期间在您的饭店所得到的服务很不满意。 虽然贵饭店是5星级,但是我发现你们并不是每天清扫客房,而且没个5天才收拾一次床铺。饭店里的餐厅的饭菜也一样糟糕。饭菜不仅价格贵而且质量很差,因此我不得不在饭店外面当地的餐馆用餐。我相信你们会认证考虑我的投诉,并尽最大的努力在将来提高你们的服务。如果您能给我上次的账单打个这我将不胜感激(随信附上收据)。盘我方您的来函。)

投诉信常用套话

->有礼貌地说明所犯错误或指出问题

I am writing to complain about...

I write to express my concern/dissatisfaction about...

I would like to express my disappointment about...

We have received your(invoice/consignment)...

With reference to your invoice of ... I must point out...

According to... , the correct figure is....

On checking the goods, we discovered that 200 radios were missing. Your invoice states that the consignment contains radios, but in fact...

->要求对方采取何种措施

I will appreciate anything you can do to help me.

I trust you will take my complaints seriously.

I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the item or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.

We should be obliged if you could investigate these matters.

We should be thankful if you could give us a refund for the faulty goods.

We shall appreciate very much if you could replace the damaged goods by Tuesday.

->盼望对方回复

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to your early reply.

投诉信常用套话

1.投诉信手段用一般现在时。

2.中间段用一般正在进行时和一般过去时。

3.结束段用将来时。

4.人称用第一人称。

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