氛围布置英文

It is almost a definition of gentlemen to say he is one who never inflicts pain.- 这里的definition是definite的词性转变，如同It's almost definite that a gentleman says that .....。本文有点矛盾，因为gentlemen为复数，而这he没有subject。这he应该是指gentlemen。翻译：可以肯定地说绅士自申他永远不会将痛楚施予别人。This definition is both refined. 这定义（他这样的一个定义)在两方面是精炼的。哪两方面？这是英语的巧妙用法，一层是对Gentlemen的定义(definition)，另外一层是Gentleman自述定义的肯定说法（definite expression)。这句话无法有准确的翻译。As far as it goes (is) accurate .- As far as it goes = 基于现状而言翻译：从先状而言是准确的。此英文句子应该与前一句连接起来。This definition is both refined as long as it goes accurate. 翻译: 如果正确，他这样的一个定义也是精炼的。both refined的both可充当为also的意思，对Gentlemen的自述定义有所认同的意思，因为开段已是一种隐约的definition。He is mainly occupied in merely removing. 他尽是执著于消除(障碍）。The obstacles which hinder the free and unembarrassed action of those around him, and he concerns with their movements rather than takes the initiation himself .- 此文带有语病。“The obstacles which hinder the free and unembarrassed action of those around him,”不是完整句子。- 修正：（与前一句子连起来）He is mainly occupied in merely removing the obstacles which hinder the free and unembarrassed action of those around him,翻译: 他尽是执著于消弭致使旁人尴尬的障碍。and he concerns with their movements rather than takes the initiation himself .翻译: 而且，他关心他们的动作，自己从不主动。He benefits may be considered as parallel to what are called comforts or convenience in arrangement of a personnel nature ---- 开头的He应该是His，或者是That he benefits- in arrangement of相当于在某某行列中。- personnel nature在中国人字眼里就是“与人共事”、“处事之道”。翻译：他得到的好处可被想象为处事之道行列中的舒适或方便。like an easy chair or a good fire, which do their part in dispelling cold and fatigue， though nature provides both means of rest and animals heat without them.翻译: 如同一张舒适的椅子或一团温暖的火堆，尽自己的责任驱寒、消除疲劳。虽然没有它们，大自然的力量也能够提供休憩的功能与动物的体温。- 这though应该还是though，而不是through，因为最后是without them，如果换成through，这复数的them、both与单数动词的provides语法不通；在理解句子中的涵义时，主谓语矛盾。全文：可以肯定地说绅士自申他永远不会将痛楚施予别人。如果情况正确，他这样的一个定义也是精炼的。他尽是执著于消弭致使旁人尴尬的障碍。而且，他关心旁人的举动，自己从不作主动。他得到的好处可被理解成处事之道中的泰然自得。如同一张舒适的椅子或一团温暖的火堆，尽自己的责任驱寒、消除疲劳。虽然没有它们，大自然的力量也能够提供休憩的功能与动物的体温。His benefits的那句是带有玄机的，霎时间很难断定。大概意思是提供舒适的氛围、好的气氛来达到自己舒服、能为自己操控的目的，这就是绅士的风度与作风吧。