篠田麻里子
My love has gone away,quietly after a hundered days.This is what?39;s she has always said she won?39;t stayfor more than what she can repayI can still hear her saythere that I?39;m not hearing tender playThe day she let me kiss her was a display,of love to those who she betray.How can I put someone to the test,when I thought I got the best.Untill the taste of bitterness then I regretbut still that I won?39;t detest,the love I can?39;t forget,like someone who has left.How can I leave someone for the rest
女儿我爱你
Turgenev (Russia), "Spring Evening" Golden clouds In resting the land of flying; Liao wide silent fields, Shining light in the dew; Gurgling brook in the valley of the shadows tumble - Spring thunder rang in the distant place, Lazy wind in the middle of poplar leaves Was bound hand and foot with wings in the incitement. Tall trees stunned silent, did not move The dark green forest silence does not ring. Only from time to time in the deep shadow, Insomnia leaves a rustling. Star ah, the beautiful Venus of love, ah, When the flame in the falling clouds shining, What a holy light but my heart, Light was the same as in childhood.
小咩要减肥
1.I want you can go with me—I want you to go with me（want sb to do sth）.2.The swing hand was waved in thin frog—The swinging hand waved in thin frog.(swinging做定语修饰hand，另外，wave本身是个不及物动词，不能用于被动)。3. have past many pink clothes_ have seen many pink clothes 4.lover in the willow bank at the expense of all his life_lover in the willow bank with all his life.5.Light missing expressed _Light missing was expressed 6.but all I want to say isn't speaking out still _but all I want to say has been held back till now.7. waved on the lake_waving on the lake, (现在分词做伴随状语)8.see the sunset clouds kissed sunset—see the sunset clouds kissing sunset (现在分词做伴随状语)9. west _vested10.seeing your smile_i see your smile.11. all my secrets discovered by you_ and all my secrets were discovered by you(discover是及物动词，此时要用被动)以上都是个人看法，希望对您有所帮助。不过我认真看了您的翻译，可见您还是下了很大的工夫的。
