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It was 5 years after the end of the Snow White’s story. I was working in my office when someone knocked at my door. "Come in, please," I said. A fat woman whose skin was as pale as snow came in and took off her hat. She turned to me,"Hello, Mr.Freud. My name is Snow White." "Hello, Ms.Snow White. Take a seat, please," I said, "What happened to you?" "I...uh..." Snow White became embarrassed. Her face was a little bit red. "I just can't stop overeating. I feel uneasy if nothing is in my mouth. In this way, I became so fat that my husband treated me more and more coldly" She said. "Ms.Snow White, take it easy," I said,"In my opinion, your ego is not strong to keep your id down. You always want to feel good, and do whatever you want, right?" "Yes. I think I need more control. By the way," Snow White took out a cigarette case, staring at me,and asked me,"Can I smoke here?" "No, I'm afraid not." I replied and pointed at the sign: "No smoking". "All right. May I chew gum?" said Snow White. She put cigarette case back and put a piece of gum in her mouth. "Listen!! I think you are orally fixated. During an oral stage starting from an 18-month babe, the only pleasure is from the mouth. Though you are not at that stage, you fail to resolve such conflicts. After then, you may constantly 'hunger' for mouth-related activities," I said and had some water. "What can I do? Mr.Freud," said Snow White. She became nervous. "Every time when you feel hungry, tell yourself you are full and try focus on something else." I advised. "I'll try. Thank you so much!" said Snow White. "May you feel better soon!" I said, smiling on her. Snow White left.