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Hi, Mike,As a student of your age, I understand your situation. I think it is wise of you to go alone. But you need to deal with your problem carefully not to hurt the feelings of your parents. Here are some of my suggestions.They may have many reasons to go with you. So have a talk with them and listen patiently. This is, I suppose, your first time to be far away from home for so long, and they surely have some worries and wish to see everything go well. Express your thanks for all their love and care. Persuade them you can manage everything well this time just as you did many times in the past. Remember to invite them to Beijing when you have already settled down. I am sure they will like the idea.
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不唯一Possible version: Hi, Grown-up, It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body. Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. Hope my ideas will work. 试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。写作要点：1. 告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免；2. 告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害；3. 建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力；4. 介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施，应该用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意字数，词数100左右，不能太多，也不能太少。点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
