我与食俱进
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夏叔叔走了，秋姑娘踏着轻快的脚步来到了人间、来到校园、来到了公园里、来到花园里。
Uncle Xia left, and autumn girl came to the world, to the campus, to the park, to the garden.
我高兴地来到花园里看着秋姑娘打扮的锦缎。那里有红色的三角梅、有五颜六色的菊花，有碧绿的玉兰树，还有金黄的向日葵……我不时看见几只蝴蝶在我身边飞来飞去，还有时听见几只知了在唱歌，可好玩了！
I＇m glad to come to the garden and watch Miss Qiu dressed up in brocade. There are red bougainvillea, colorful chrysanthemums, green magnolia trees, and golden sunflowers From time to time, I see several butterflies flying around me, and sometimes I hear some cicadas singing. It＇s fun!
其中，我看见了一种十分漂亮的仙人掌，你知道这是什么样子的吗？是一个橘黄色的盆子，上面画有两朵向日葵和一只七星瓢虫，而且仙人掌下有五彩缤纷的小彩石，仙人掌上有几朵五颜六色的小花像真的一样，真漂亮啊！
Among them, I saw a very beautiful cactus. Do you know what it looks like? It＇s an orange basin. There are two sunflowers and aseven star ladybug on it. There are colorful stones under the cactus. There are several colorful flowers on the cactus. They are really beautiful!
花园里都是秋姑娘留下的脚印！
The garden is full of footprints left by autumn girl!
尚同家园
My home in a beautiful house, my house is the area on the seven floor, there are four bright room, two large living room, my spacious room next to my own bathroom, kitchen, living room in the downstairs, there is a beautiful garden, the garden have all kinds of beautiful flowers, small there are many children and the elderly living, our community is a harmonious community!我家在一个美丽的小区里，我家是小区在七楼，有四个明亮的房间，两个大大的客厅，我宽敞的房间旁边有个我自己的浴室，客厅在厨房不远处，我家楼下有个漂亮的花园，花园里有各种好看的花，小区里有许多孩子和老人居住，我们的小区是一个和谐的小区!
