做梦的燕子
写作思路：写出网购的优点和缺点，对于优点和缺点，分开举例说明。正文：With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers,shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.译文：随着互联网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物已经成为我们生活中的一个普遍的问题。Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.译文：在这里，消费者可以买到他们所需要的一切。Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.译文：网上购物有很多好处，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.译文：人们不必浪费大量的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.译文：这对于那些不能亲自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人来说尤其可取。The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet.译文：这些货物在网上的各种形状,大小和颜色都有。All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.译文：所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前点击鼠标。The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.译文：他们所订购的商品将及时送到他们的。However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.译文：然而，在互联网上购物也有其缺点。The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.译文：第一个缺点是消费者看不到商品或者亲自试用。Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.译文：有时候，真正的商品可能不一样，因为他们在电脑上看到的。The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.译文：其次是一些商店在网上没有注册。They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.译文：在他们从你得到的钱之后,他们永远不会给你提供任何东西。Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.译文：一旦被欺骗，你会发现你无处可去抱怨。
MissAlice1203
More and more people begin to shop online. Of course there are many advantages . First it can save much time ,especially for those who are busy with their work . Second it is convenient and you don'
肖肖肖肖肖雪*
Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who shop online. Some people think that it is easy to shop online instead of going to shopping malls and stores. There are many different kinds of goods online, and people and search for what they want easily. So they don't have to spend time looking for what they want. However, online shopping may be harmful because those goods may not have good quality. When things are broken, it is also very difficult to find people who are responsible for repair.如今，越来越多的人在网上购物。有些人认为网上购物比逛商场和商店容易。网上有很多不同种类的商品，人们可以很容易地找到他们想要的。所以他们不必花时间去寻找他们想要的东西。然而，网上购物可能是有害的，因为这些商品可能没有好的质量。当东西坏了，也很难找到负责修理的人。如今，越来越多的人在网上购物。有些人认为网上购物比逛商场和商店容易。网上有很多不同种类的商品，人们可以很容易地找到他们想要的。所以他们不必花时间去寻找他们想要的东西。然而，网上购物可能是有害的，因为这些商品可能没有好的质量。当东西坏了，也很难找到负责修理的人。
毓毓baby
一、写作思路
这是一道辨析题，所以内容需要全面，既包括网购的好处，也包括网购的坏处，形成对比。开头可以直接带出话题，比如我认为网购的利弊主要体现在这几个方面，中间展开好处和坏处，各列举一下观点，结尾提出关于网购的建议。
二、双语写作范文参考
三、双语写作模板参考
赵鹏飞1976
关于网购利弊的英语作文Recently, my house is out of a new, my mother began to shopping on the Internet.Around this time, the network shopping gradually in vogue, age nearly middle-aged mother also unwilling to lag behind, for a while, before she accidentally got a shopping site ebay site, surprisingly, she also played on, mom was transformed from the original "online chat" into "online shopping", then, my mom to launched "Ann tenpay" online, then there is a succession of saving money. But, after all, online shopping also has the advantages of online shopping, if will not have to become a drowned rat on a rainy day, if you don't want to run errands, can also be at home while enjoying a chicken leg web station.On one occasion, I want to buy clothes, mom I know drive will be here soon, she said: "son, how about we go online to buy ah?" Once I listen to, bother to promise. I went to the Internet a look, ah! What a lot of clothes here ah, really is multifarious, careful see, everything is so beautiful, after careful screening, I didn't set a cheap and easy dress, after press ok, ok! All finished.Ah, online shopping is convenient, not only affordable, and good quality, it is kill two birds with one stone really.近来，我家出了一件新鲜事――我妈妈开始在网上购物了。 这一阵子，网络购物渐渐在各地风行起来，岁数以近中年的妈妈也不甘落后，前一阵子，她无意中得到了一个购物网站易趣的网址，想不到，她竟也玩上了，妈妈便从原来的“网上聊天族”变成了“网上购物族”，紧接着，妈妈去网上开通了“安付通”，然后便是接连不断的存钱。但网上购物毕竟也有网上购物的好处，要是下雨天就不用变成落汤鸡了，如果不想跑腿，也可以在家里一边享受鸡腿一边逛网站。有一次，我想买衣服穿，妈妈一知道劲头马上就来了，她说：“儿子，我们一起去网上买怎么样呀?”我一听，连声答应。我来到网上一看，啊!这里的衣服真多呵，真可谓五花八门，仔细一看，每一件都这么漂亮，经过精心筛选之后，我才定下一件又便宜又大方的服装，按确定以后，ok!一切完成了。呵，网上购物真方便，不但价格实惠，而且质量上乘，真是一举两得。
灯神的精灵
写作思路：题目《网购的利弊》，可以采用分-总的结构。前面两段分开写，首段写网购的利，第二段写网购的弊端，最后简单写网购的注意事项。这样就可以详细的让读者知道具体的利弊都有哪些，文章内容就是比较充实的了。
双语范文参考
写作模板参考
木易小青争
写作思路及要点：围绕网上购物，举出网上购物的利与弊，最后总结自己的想法。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，网购已经成为人们的.热门购物方式之一，出门购物已经成为一种休闲时的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
网购的优点有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，订货不受时间、地点的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。它从订货、买货到货物上门无需亲临现场，既省时又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，网购还有许多缺点。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达手里，会感觉和实物有不一样，这就不如在商场里买到的放心。网络支付不安全，可能被偷窥，密码被盗。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收货太慢，尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了不知多少倍，毕竟买家还是要等上几天。网购也不能和亲戚朋友一起体会逛街闲聊的悠闲。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我认为网购不比逛街好，应该减少网购或加强网购的安全性。
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