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读后续写是高考英语一年两考省份新增加的题型,用以替代短文改错。这种题型,是世界范围内,第一次应用于高利害性考试。
英语读后续写技巧和方法:
1、通读全文,读懂原文。
通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题,即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。
2、构思情节,谋篇布局。
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性,构思好情节发展,这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说,不是写神话,因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。
3、理清逻辑,优化语言。
这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑,词句结构都必须符合当时人狼大战的情景。写作不必追求高大上的词汇,相反,朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语。杨柳的美体现在纤细婀娜,樟树的美体现在挺拔繁茂,不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格,必须采用适当的描写侧重点。
读后续写备考策略:
①做好读后续写微技能“强基计划”语言的积累。
②认真研究近五年各地读后续写真题,弄清给定语篇特点和文风,揣摩和研读真题范文。
③选择合适文长的故事或小说选段进行诵读,感知情感及故事主线。
④限时解读文本(5分钟以内),限时表达成型(25分钟以内)。
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1. 他觉得他的心像是被一把钝了的锉刀残忍地割开,悲痛从伤口流出,撒落一地忧伤。he felt his heart filelike a blunt the cruel cut, grief from a wound, a Sala sad.2、平静的湖面激起了浪花,我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。The surface of the calmlake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave.3、英语测验得了100分,小明抑制不住内心的喜悦,像小鸟一样飞进了家门。the English test got 100points, Xiao Ming can not restrain the joy of heart, like a bird flying intothe family.4、大家心说不出有多高兴,脚下好像生了风,走得又快又有劲。we can not say how happyfeet like the wind, walk faster and stronger.5、晶莹的泪珠,像断了线的珍珠,滚下面颊。Crystal tears, likebroken pearls, roll down your cheeks.6、我的心绷得紧紧的。My heart is tight.7、我真是抑制不住内心的喜悦,蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。I couldn't restrain myjoy and jumped into the house.8、嫉妒的产生,是由于把自己的所得与他人所得进行不合理的比较。Jealousy arises fromunreasonable comparisons between one's own gains and those of others.8、我觉得脸上热辣辣的,手心里透出一片冷汗,心头像有千百个蚂蚁爬过。I felt hot on my face,cold sweat in my hands and thousands of ants crawling through my heart.9、爸妈又吵架了,吵得我心烦意乱的,我独自在楼上,我该怎么办呢,我悲伤地哭泣着。My parents quarreledagain, which upset me. I was upstairs alone. What should I do? I cried sadly.10、牙齿咬得“格格”作响,眼里闪着一股无法遏制的怒火,好似一头被激怒的狮子。The teeth were bitten"gritty" and there was an irrepressible anger in his eyes, like alion being enraged.11、他在一昼夜里积压的怒气如火山一样爆发了。His accumulated angererupted like a volcano all day and night.12、他怒不可遏地吼叫着,这声音像沉雷一样滚动着,传得很远很远。He roared furiously. Thesound rolled like a thunderstorm and spread far and wide.13、我那颗忐忑不安的心越跳越快,我不敢往下想了My nervous heart isbeating faster and faster. I dare not think about it.14、我整天愁眉苦脸的,友谊破裂了,在心灵上留下了难以弥合的伤痕。All day long I frownedand grieved, and friendship broke down, leaving an indelible scar in my heart.15、我心疼得像刀绞一样,眼泪不住地往下流。My heart ached like aknife and my tears kept running down.16、谁也惹不起他,我们只好忍气吞声,敢怒不敢言。Nobody could provoke him,so we had to swallow our breath and dare not speak in anger.
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