简历修改英文

根据你的大体意思稍微改动了一些语法， 也变动了一些不太通顺的句子。不敢保证完全无误， 但是希望能帮上你！Experience 2007/07 -- 2007/08： Shanghai jiayang S&T company | Tele SalesHeavy Machinenary | Company Size:20-99 | 1000-2000RMB/MonthI contact our clients by phone calls or face-to-face, and introduce our products to them. Then I will keep this ralationship no matter they book orders or not.·English and Computer Abilities I have a good command of both spoken and written English. I have passed CET-4 ,CET-6,BEC(v). Intermediate InterpretationI am familiar with computer skills, such as Microsoft Word, Excel , PowerPoint etc.·Extra-curriculum Activities I have organized several activities in the college, such as welcome parties, climbing mountains, etc. I have participated in the activities in the campus actively. I took part-time jobs after study, for example family teacher and market investigator. I paid close attention to public welfare establishment, like charity sale, contribution and so on . ·Character I am a person who is passionate, open, clear, hardworking, and discreet. Efficient teamwork is also one of my merits.I hope you would like to give me an opportunity to show my skills and talents in your corporation. Thank you!

可以。因为有些公司会要求提供英文简历，所以boss的系统会有一项自动把简历改成英文的功能。你也可以把它恢复成中文简历。BOSS直聘”是在全球范围内首创互联网“直聘”模式的在线招聘产品，由赵鹏带领团队创办，2014年7月上线，隶属于看准科技集团，集团旗下运营看准网、BOSS直聘和店长直聘三个品牌，总服务用户数超过1亿，致力于用科技解决职业领域问题。

没法改，你自己的翻译不错。如果要改正，那就得动大手术。