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学生写作能力较差的第一个层面表现在词汇贫乏、句子结构错误、中式表达等。因此首先要在句式的基础训练上下功夫，做到句子结构准确，表达无误，并培养自己一句多译的能力，进行不同句式结构表达训练。同学们可以在表达多样化上有所提升， 突破单一句式，使文章生动活泼、结构紧凑。比如可以学会运用以下表达方式：1. 使用非谓语动词形式用非谓语动词可以使句子简洁。例如：We were surrounded by a variety of buildings. We found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park and we felt joyful.→Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.2. 使用with的复合结构with的复合结构, 也就是独立主格结构,常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。例如：I could not go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me.→I could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.（2004广东卷）3. 使用复合句复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。例如：① Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids. （2008山东卷）② It is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute to the development of our society.③ Additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million smokers in China, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. What amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand smoke. （2010广东高考考场作文）4. 使用倒装句， 强调句， 虚拟语气等使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感受到作者的强烈情感。He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. （强调句）→Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. （倒装句）综合使用以上句式， 长短句结合，可以增强句子的连贯性和表现力。要写出好的文章，词句的积累非常重要。恰当地运用一些常用的习惯表达和典型句式既能有效地减少文章中的病句，又能给文章添彩。对课文中出现的佳句，同学们可以进行摘录。笔者创编了下面的几个句子，同学们可以先口头后书面练习：① 帮助他学习数学， 对我来说也是一个显摆自己的机会。Here was a chance for me to distinguish myself by helping him learn maths.（练习表达distinguish oneself ）② 虽然做好了失败的准备，我仍然感到伤心并决定抓住每一分钟更加努力提高我的英语。Prepared for the failure， I still felt upset and decided to work even harder to seize every minute to improve my English.（练习过去分词作状语；表达seize every minute to do sth. ）③ 被她的耐心所感动，我对自己的粗鲁行为感到尴尬并决定学做有耐心的人，这有助于我与同学、朋友和父母很好地相处。Moved by her patience, I felt embarrassed for my rude behavior and decided to learn to be a patient person, which helps me get along well with my classmates, my friends and my parents.（练习过去分词作状语；定语从句的用法）④ 只有把竞争和合作相联合，才能有助于我们达到目标并满足自身需求。Only when competition combines with cooperation can it help in obtaining our goals and satisfying our needs.（练习倒装句；表达obtain one?蒺s goal, satisfy one?蒺s needs）这样，一些好词、好的表达、好的句式，经过反复的语言实践后，已经“内化”成自己的东西，用时自然“轻车熟路”。高中生在日常英语写作中，最大的问题是词汇量不足，想表达某种意思，但“茶壶倒饺子”，表达不出来，大脑一片空白，绞尽脑汁拼命“挤出”几个单词和几个简单的句子，还有可能词不达意或表达不得体，这与平时不重视词汇积累有关。作为高二的学生，虽然已经积累了一定的词汇，但还是感觉到平时记的词到了写作文的时候记不起来，不会用。这主要是因为平时记的一些单词，可能是孤立地记的，没有运用，还没有“内化”成自己随时可用的“有效词汇”。解决这个问题有两条途径。第一条途径是积极、大量、用心地阅读，在阅读中体验鲜活词汇的用法，看多了，自然就在脑海中留下了“痕迹”，到写作时，这些词汇就会“信手拈来”。阅读和写作是互相促进、相辅相成的。有些词汇和句型，只有通过广泛的阅读才能把它们运用得更熟练，表达得更准确。反过来，这也可以有效地提高我们的阅读理解能力。哪怕是平时做的阅读理解题，做完之后也可以把那些好词、好的表达摘录下来并熟记；遇见好的文章，把它们按照不同体裁和主题整理出来，如果有二三十篇不同类型的好文章烂熟于胸，自然会对写作会有所帮助。第二条途径就是记语块。语块就是一些能表达一定意义的语料。实际上，学生在写作的时候，最主要的还是不会表达，“肚里没料”。平时不能孤立地记单词，应该记表达。比如关于A Healthy Life 这一话题，同学们可以整理并创编以下语块：① 我长寿而且精力充沛，要归功于我的健康生活 my long and active life must be due to the healthy life② 年纪大了仍然很活跃remain active even in old age③ 更注重健康饮食的重要性pay more attention to the importance of a healthy diet④ 随着对……更深入的了解with a better understanding of ...⑤ 当代社会的主要趋势the major trends in contemporary society这些语块在一定的情景中，适当地组合起来，就可以写出一段好文章。一篇文章是由若干个段落组成的。把段落写好了，写作文就有了良好的基础，进步也更快。一个段落，要注意其单一性和连贯性。一段文章应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面。为了写好段落，通常的写法是：在一段的开头用一句话点出本段的中心意思，即“主题句”，然后用几句来证明、解释或发挥这个中心意思，最后再用一句把本段的意思小结一下。还要注意写好每一个句子。比如，要把句子写完整；同样的意思可用一句话表达的，就不要再添上两三句话来反复说明凑字数；句与句之间在逻辑上要连贯；文段中的句式应该长短结合、错落有致。常见的练习写作的形式有：① 看图说话/写话新课标的教材图文并茂，为看图说话的练习提供了丰富的素材，可充分利用。比如已知话题Women of Achievements时， 可根据自己所了解的有关宋庆龄的情况，作出如下叙述：Song Qingling was considered to be one of the greatest women in the world. She married Dr. Sun Zhongshan in 1915. She was the vice president of the People?蒺s Republic of China for many years. The impression she makes on me is that she has made so great contributions to the Chinese revolution that all Chinese people love her.这样的叙述话语不要求太多，能够抓住重点，正确运用习惯表达即可。② 缩写缩写是在保留原文体裁、题材、主要内容、结构顺序、人称角度等的前提下概括原文内容。缩写课文一般应该用自己的话来写，不能只停留在拼凑原文的词句上，也不要逐句、逐段照原文去改写。③ 仿写仿写既可以降低写作难度，又可以学以致用。当同学们掌握了对地理位置的描述，对气候、环境、资源、历史以及人口、风俗习惯的描写，学会了对有关国家、城市、旅游景点描写的写作方法， 就可以仿写自己所熟悉的某个城市的概况，并以一个导游的身份介绍给外宾。④ 评写关于某一话题同学们可以详细地陈述赞同与反对两方面的观点及理由。⑤ 串写给出每个自然段的主题句，顺着主题句把文段写完。比如：（1） With the development of science and technology, China is facing a lot of problems with the environment...（2） The city of Guangzhou lies in the south of China, which is famous as a commercial center and green city. But in my view the environment...（3） As a native of Guangzhou, I am concerned about the environment here very much. I have thought of a plan to make our city more beautiful...⑥ 练习写周记、日记这是培养学生英语自由写作能力的第一步。写周记、日记，学生不受内容和经验的限制，可就熟悉的题材，充分发挥自己的想象力，自由表达。但是写日记、周记要有事可记、有话可写。总之，要提高自己的英语写作水平，首先要有积累；其次要自主、自觉地长期练习；还要读写结合，多渠道地努力。更多优秀英语作文尽在：英语汇作文网 原文链接地址：

Internet

Everything lives with opposite forces。The same can be said about modern technology， such as Internet。

At first glance Internet offers us excitement and a worl of promise。 Frankly speaking， people who have some ideas of it can not deny the merits born with the system。 For instance，it can improve proficiency in scientific research， for by means of it scientists and researchers can get a global look at the latest development in the field concerned and accordingly they need spend no time doing what has already been done。 In view of personal communication， the most convenient means could be peculiar to Internet， too。

While peoplespeakhighly of Internet，its drawbacks shouldn＇t be neglected。 Sometimes， alittle fatal breakdown of the system， or a disastrous error could bring us an enormous amount of damage and loss。Meanwhile， with lnternet＇s replacement of hooks or the written work as the main source of information， human＇s writing abilities are weakened and relations between people are desalinated。

However， every country on this planet should work hard todevelopthesystemtoserveusmoreefficientlyand comfortably， because in the net all countries are interrelated。

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作者从正反两个方面论述了网络的优点以及它带给人们的负面影响，但在结尾段还是肯定地认为我们应该发展网络系统，因为我们已经进入了全球化的时代。

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任何事情的存在都有负面影响。可以说科技也是如此，例如网络。初看起来，网络带给我们兴奋的一个有前途的世界。坦白地讲，既使对此有些想法的人也不能否认网络与生俱来的优点。举个例子，它可提高科研效率，因为科学家们观察它们借此能够获得对相关领域最新发展的`全面了解。并且他们无需费时做已做过的事情。对于个人交流沟通，最便捷的方式恐怕也是网络。

当人们高度评价网络时；应忽视它的缺欠。有时系统小有一点致命的故障或一点灾难性的错误都会带来巨大的损失。 同时随着作为主要信息来源的各种书籍和书写工作逐渐被网络替代，人类的写作能力变弱，而且人与人之间的关系也淡漠了。

尽管如此，这个星球上的每个国家都应努力发展这个网络系统以便更高效服务于人类。因为在网上，所有的国家都是相互联系的。

在平日的学习、工作和生活里，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，作文可分为小学作文、中学作文、大学作文（论文）。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢？以下是我为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与收藏。

I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

Smiling can let you have more friends.So I say, smiling is like a flower. It will give you happiness.

我认为微笑是一样重要的象阳光。微笑是象阳光，因为它可能使人愉快和有一个早晨好。如果您不是愉快的，您能微笑，您然后将感觉愉快。某人也许说，“但是我不感到愉快”。然后我会说，“请微笑，您，当您愉快地是愉快或戏剧与您的朋友。您真正地再将是愉快的.”。

微笑可能让您有更多朋友。如此我说，微笑是象花。它将给您幸福。

Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for football which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the football results of the little leagues. During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home. I usually go there during the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the city. I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet life of the villagers.

夏天是户外运动最好的季节.这是一个橄榄球的季节,橄榄球由于广受欢迎被称为全民运动.我常常看电视,看报纸,从报道中获得小联盟橄榄球赛的比赛结果.夏日里,我喜欢经常去海滩,因为那里离我家不远.在城里的学校呆了几个月后,暑假我常常去那里放松一下.此处有我很熟悉的村民们的宁静生活,这让我倍感舒适.

Winter is very cold and windy in most parts of China. I usually look forward to the Spring Festival and the winter holiday when I can go to the south where the climate is warmer during these holidays. Also, I look forward to seeing my grandparents and my friends. Winter is the time everyone is in a festive mood. In the city, I usually do a lot of reading at home in the winter because of eh cold weather outside.

中国大部分地区的冬天是即冷又有风的。我总是盼望着春节或寒假，到时候我就可以去南方了，当地的气候在这时会暖和的多。我也盼望着去探望我的祖父母和我的朋友。冬天，每个人都怀着喜庆的心情。在城里，冬天的时候我经常待在家里尽情地看书，因为外面的天气非常的冷。

It was Sunday and I didn't have to go to school. I finished my homework the day before. So I decided to help mother do housework. I washed some clothes after I got up. Then I went shopping with a basket. I bought some meat, eggs and some vegetables in the market. After I came back, I started to cook dinner for the whole family. In the evening, I sat at the table and began to write down on my notebook what I had done during the day.

它是星期天，并且我没有必须去学校。我前一天完成了我的家庭作业。如此我决定帮助做家事。在我起来了之后，我洗了一些衣裳。然后我带着篮子去购物。我在市场上买了一些肉、蛋和有些菜。在我回来了之后，我开始为全家烹调晚餐。在晚上，我在我的笔记本写下什么我白天做了什么。

My English Teacher

Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looks very young.She's about thirty years old, she has long hair,two big eyes and small mouth. She is funny ，but she is strict with us.She wants us to study hard, Her lessons are interesting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons.She is a good teacher, we all like her.

王老师是我的英语老师。她看起来很年轻.她大约三十岁，她有一头长发，一双大眼睛和一个小嘴巴。她很有趣，不过，她严格要求我们。她要我们努力学习，她的课很有意思。上她的课我们非常高兴，我们都喜欢她的课。她是一位好老师，我们都喜欢她。

Spring is a delightful season. The temperatures are moderate, and the blooming trees and flowers make the city bright with colors. This is the time when we can begin to wear lighter and more brightly colored clothes and go outdoors more often. Smaller children like to bring their kites out to the spacious square. Also I enjoy going back to the village on this holiday after being in the city for the winter months.

春天是个让人欣喜的季节.气温适中,挂满绿叶的树和盛开的花朵给城市增添了明亮的色彩.在这个时节里,我们可以穿上轻便靓丽的衣服经常出门去了.小孩子们则喜欢在广阔的天空中放风筝.在城里呆了一个冬天之后,我也喜欢回到村子里度假.