考研英语2013作文

没有，格式上很正确啊。还有，考研英语一般字数够了，语句没有太多毛病，基本就可以了，因为大家水平都不行的。好多人自己写完都不想自己反过来看的。所以，整齐，没有太多明显的语病，字数够，这就基本没问题

2013年英语一作文试题

Directions:

Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

参考范文：

Recently, there has been a growing concern among the public over the topic of the choice after graduation. As is described in the picture, a group of graduates are facing various roads to go, such as searching for jobs, pursuing further study, going abroad and becoming entrepreneurs. The picture intends to convey us that, as adults, college graduates have to make their own decisions about future life.

After graduation, college students should choose future life based on their own realities and dreams. For those, who are eager to become economically independent and to put into practice what they have learned in college, taking a job or doing poineering work may be satisfying and rewarding. Getting established as a bread-winner after graduation is their main desire. By contrast, others who want to take advantage of the favorable conditions in college, however, ought to try to enroll in graduate programs inside or outside. For them, a Master's degree or even a Doctoral degree represents a much more ambitious goal than a bachelor's degree, because they cherish lifetime success and interest more in academic achievements than money.

It is sensible that we should take a rational attitude towards the decisive choice. For the part of my own, getting a higher degree abroad has long been my dream. I’m a strong believer that one should do more research and learn more while he or she is still young.

算格式错误。

e-mail格式属于书信的格式；

To： From：这种是属于通知格式，二者属于不同的体裁，所以算格式错误。

扩展资料

考研英语小作文写作技巧

1、格式

称呼：英语应用文称呼有这样的特点，如果是不认识的人，一般称呼为敬词＋尊称。

正文：正文格式一般格式为首段开头空四个字母，段落之间不空行。考生在格式方面可以根据自己的习惯进行选择。只要让阅卷人看得舒服，且完全符合应用文要求的文体就可以。

2、语言

用词准确是最基础的要求之一。其次，句型多变。例如既有并列句，也有复合句，还有从句。注意语法运用要正确。

3、其他要点

考试时注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔。虽说小作文的字数充其量在一百多个单词，但是依旧要在脑子里理清思路。最好能够在仔细审题以后，认真列个提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰

没有跑题 考研看的不是你作文跑题没有 而是你的行文写作思路

步骤没错，只要没有大的语法错误，有比较好的句子，就能得儿高分的！

满分20分的话，能得10-13分。 首先，阅卷老师先看到的是开头。英文信件的标准开头是：Dear ...., 一般不用hi 其次，正文的第一句不用介绍自己是谁，直接切入主题。因为对方收到你的信，就知道你是谁，你的职务，所以不用在开头赘述。 中间段写的不错，中间段最要注意的是单词拼写。 另外，最后一段也是老师比较喜欢看的。第一个forward ....可以改为inform / notify this message to your friends. 还有，your guys arrived sincerely 应该改为you guys‘ coming. look forword to 后面应该加名词形式。 最后，结尾，英语中最常用的是：Yours, 或者是Yours sincerely, 或者是 Yours faithfully. 你用的那个awesomely一般不用到，如果碰上有些老师不习惯用那个，那你的作文分肯定就低了。 写的不错，祝你考研成功！加油！