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只找到不同地区的 不过万变不离其宗 看看也不错 2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久,你和来自英国的一位中学生Allen一起讨论了一个话题:the ways to learn English better。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点,用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。注意:1.开头和结尾部分已写好。2.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使所写内容连贯。3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。4.词数:70个左右。His ideas1. reading English newspapers2. talking with friends in English3. seeing English films2007年杭州市中考英语满分作文范文 Mr Nunan,Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.Liu Mei点评:本文结构非常清楚,第一段阐述了Allen的观点,第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来,显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式,比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等,避免了重复,增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功,比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑,读来一气呵成。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展,“每天锻炼一小时,健康工作50年,幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心,校园里出现了可喜的变化:运动时间延长了,运动项目增加了,学生体质增强了,校园生活丰富了。请以Sports in Our School为题给校刊写一篇报道。内容要点提示:1. time for sports2. kinds of sports3. change of students’ health and study4. change of school life要求:1.80词左右,可适当发挥。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。 2007年重庆市中考英语满分作文范文 Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running,and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happi
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多看作文,积累些单词和好句,作文中有几句出彩的句子就可以拿到高分的~~看看我空%0间分享的经验吧书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。如ago,last…——过去时next,in…——将来时等人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。常用连接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…And then,Finally,In the end,At last2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,butAlthough+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doingOn the one hand…On the other hand…Some…,while others…4.表因果关系的:Because,AsSo,Thus,Therefore,As a result5.表换一种方式表达:In other words6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing7.表陈述事实:In fact8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous.状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful.动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.It‘s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.常用状语从句句型:1)时间when,not…until,as soon as2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)3)结果so…that+clause,too…to do(太……以至于……)4)条件if,unless(除非),as long as(只要)5)让步though,although,even though,even ifno matter what/when/where/who/which/how6)比较as…as…,not so…as…,than五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:1.We live more and more comfortable.改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers.改正:much information(不可数名词由much修饰)3.There has many programs in TV.改正:There are many programs on TV.(There be句型和介词短语)4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章,特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。
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英语作文不仅考察学生的语言表达能力,还考察学生的英语运用和组织能力,下面分享几篇中考英语满分作文,供大家学习参考。1.文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题,文章的最后指出:“ We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗?对此观点你有何看法?请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法,阐述理由,并举例说明。 In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like. A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person. For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face. So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks. 在我看来,我们需要根据人们的行为和长相来判断他们。 一个人的性格和能力是非常重要的,但是对于一些工作来说,长相也很重要,比如演员、服务员、甚至是老师,因为看到一个漂亮的人很愉快 例如,我班上的老师都教得很好,他们很和善,乐于助人。我们都喜欢他们。但是最受欢迎的老师是我的英语老师,因为她看起来真的很漂亮。她每天打扮得漂漂亮亮的,脸上总是挂着微笑。 所以让我们尽力提高我们的能力,个性和长相。 2.假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。 Good evening,everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional food. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious. I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we’ll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening. I hope you'll enjoy your stay here! 大家晚上好。我是李华,学生会主席。我很高兴欢迎你来参加聚会。 在广东,你可以享用许多传统食物。如虾饺、牛肉或鱼丸、鸡爪等。尤其是鱼丸和鸡爪真的很好吃。我想你会喜欢他们的。明天早上,我们将去广州最大的剧院。你将在那里欣赏粤剧。我们下午去中山公园。你可以在那里体验中国功夫。太神奇了。晚上我们将参加一个关于广东历史的讲座。 希望你在这里过得愉快! 3.自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。 Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society,I spared no effort to improve myself all the time. In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person. 自律在我们的生活中起着重要的作用。老实说,我是一个自律的人。我过去常常遵守各种规则,按时交到学校指定的任务。我不仅能尊敬我所有的老师,而且能和我的同学相处得很好。在家里,我能平衡家务和家庭作业。我通常提前制定一个计划,以便更容易实现我的目标。做完所有的任务后,我养成了早睡早睡的习惯。在社会上,我一直不遗余力地提高自己。 总而言之。自律让我受益匪浅。首先,我有许多好习惯,这使我的生活更容易和更有规律。第二,我的生活和学习一直在高效地进行,所以节省了很多时间。第三,自律让我为更美好、更光明的未来做好了准备。今后,我将继续做一个自律的人。
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