封闭式培训英语作文初中

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作文大意：许多学校采取封闭式管理，谈谈对此的看法。Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.We have different ideas about that.Now let me tell you our opinions.Some of us hold the idea that if the school keep us all day long ,our freedom will be limited.Moreover,we may lose a lot of social opportunities.Besides,we can't develop our interests andhobbies well.One coin has two sides,some students thingk that school is a space to learn the knowledge,the only thing we should do is staying there to study.What's more,because we lack self�awareness,without the guide of teachers,we may make mistakes.In my view,it would be better that school don't keep us in school all day long.After all ,textbook knowledge is not the only thing we should learn.

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Some students think that's a good idea because the students can have more time to study and get less disturbed from surrounding environment. But I don't agree it at all. The reason is that it may make students get tired of school even tired of studying. And also school life is a very hard life. sometimes students need relax. You can't count on relaxing thoroughly in school with many others studying arround you. In order for our students to study well, It's no use keeping them all day long in school. The better way is to caltuer their interesting and guide them to study well.

Possible version:Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it.Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies. Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence/affect their studies. Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. (I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests范文，稍微改改。

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