英语作文在线查错

1. “one of ……”句型，“Beethoven was one of the greatest musician”的“musician”要改为复数“musicians”，后面的“writer”，“inventor”是同样的错误。2. 可以变换一下句式显得没那么啰嗦，比如说”want to be succeed"/'want to be successful'可以交替使用。3. “But all the opportunities are accompanied with challenges though not all the challenge will make you succeed.”很简单的语法问题，but和though不能出现在同一句子里； ·你在阐述一个道理，opportunites和challenges都应该不用the去特指； ·而将句子改为”Not all challenges will make you successful, but all opportunities are accompanied with challenges"，避免了原句的头重脚轻。4. "So I think success is not only need diligence,but also need a little luck." 改为“So I think success needs only diligence,but also a little luck.” （语法问题）5. “Edison ever said”改为“Edison had said”（语法错误）6. "it need you lucky enough to meet it." 改为 “ it needs you to be lucky enough to meet it.”（语法错误）7. “And can you have the ability to pass the challenge?” 改为 “And do you have the ability to get through the challenge?”（表达不当）8. "She was the first woman to win two Nobel prizes." 改为 “She was the first woman who win two Nobel prizes.”（语法错误）9."But she wasn't content."改为“But she was not content.”并把“not”重读使得句子强调更重。10.“There are many challenge and only one opportunity at Madame Curie's life.” 改为 ”There are many challenges but only one opportunity in Madame Curie's life.“ 。我发现文章有很多关于单复数的错误，重复的我就不一一指出了； ·将”and“改为”but“体现转折的语气 ·”in one's life“ 短语11. "She was looked down upon because she was a woman." 改为 ”She was looked down upon by others because she is a woman.“ 加一个”by others“使得句子更顺；如果说的是事实，就不用过去式，直接”she is a woman“，如果说”she was a woman“就好像她以前是女人，然后做变性手术变成男人了……12. All of her experiment was dangerous……” 改为 “All of her experiments were(这里用are应该也可以） dangerous……” 同样是单复数问题。13."her husband was dead of a accident" 改为“her husband died in an accident”，注意是“an accident”14.”But she had never given up and passed all the opportunity“.改为“But she had never given up and grab all the opportunities.”15.“gather experience” 改为“gain experience”16."pass the challenge" 改为“get through the challenge”17.“That is all my speech, thank you.” 改为“ that's all for my speech. thanks for listening.” 你也可以在百度搜“英语演讲结束语”，选个你喜欢的吧。不知道你是几年级，不过这篇演讲真的是太多错误了。如果是演讲比赛之类的话，我劝你举的例子不要有太多的生僻词汇，到时忘了怎样读了更麻烦，而且我相信那些单词老师也未必听得懂。什么是演讲？我觉得好的演讲是能带动听众的，我是大学生，参加过两次演讲比赛，这都是经验之谈，希望的采纳为最佳答案！谢谢！