给员工写培训英语信

good afternoon是不需要的~~~~~I would like to know 也可以修改结尾也可以改成: I'm looking forward to your reply."at your convenience."可以不要,这样比较简洁 其他没细看~~~~~~~应该问题不大

楼主，素我直言，如果你的主管是一名外国人，特别是欧美人， 看到你这篇邮件会不知所云。甚至会看不懂这篇英语有点罗唆，而且没有主题，虽然是英语写的，但是中国式味道很浓。既然写英文邮件应该以英语方式书写，正如上两位朋友所说的，英语还是简洁直接一些较好。推荐用Sunrise0350的那篇文章，在以你自己的意思做一点修改即可

商务书函是要简介的....简单明了，开门见山...

你好，以此为模板！！NoticeA meeting is going to be held in Room 103 of Building 3 at 7 on the evening of April 5. Problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on. A member of each dormitory is required to be present. They should take notebooks with them and arrive on time. They should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discussed and what measures will be taken.The Dormitory CommitteeApril 2nd, 2007