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My first day at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day ,and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10 and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl. 试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，话题是My First Stay at Home Alone：要点是1.父母出差，自己一个人在家；2.自己照顾自己； 3.难忘有意义的经历。首先，我们应该坚持平时的作文训练，作文的水平提高并非一朝一夕的事，所以要注意平时的积累；其次要注意话题作文的素材收集和常用句子的写法，适当进行必要地记诵。第三，注意中西方文体的差异，记住特殊问题的特殊格式。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。点评：话题作文要围绕话题展开，在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得富于变化。
快乐之光
Jack and John are good friend many years. One day they get rid of Manhattan going out on business. In the morning, after they choose dish from a menu in the inn, John says: "I go to buy a copy of a newspaper and return soon". Five minutes later, John take nothing and return with complaining,and the pip-pip makes an uproar in the mouth. "What's up "? Jack asks about. John replies: "I have arrived at the news stall across the street and have held a copy of a newspaper and have handed over a 10 U. S. dollar bank note to that chap and have let him be given changes by me. He is not given changes by me not only and shrink to newspaper have leaked on the contrary from under my arm and have not chid me easy to get angry yet. He said I am the people who takes the opportunity of buying newspaper changing small change". Two people eats as well as, discussing about this one interlude music or song in a film or play. John thinks that here pedler is insolent and rude , unreasonable, quality dispatches very much, probably be some of "base chaps ". Jack is laughed at saying: "Be really like that? I go to try ". Jack goes to road opposite side thereupon , the very mild field host with a smiling face to the news stall says: "Sir, sorry , can help busy. I am a nonlocal people , want to buy a portion The New York Times take a look at very much. I do not have but small change on hand , do not am forced to use this 10 U. S. dollar bank notes. During the period of you are bustling about, be really to give you trouble ". Buy the newspaper people being bustling about as well as handing over a copy of a newspaper to Jack , saying without the least hesitation: "Hail Columbia, takes it away , convenient moment gives my small change again"! Think that John sees Jack when returning in triumph but returning to be holding "the victory product " , feel uncertain asking about inseparably: "Jack , you said you not having small change , how that chap has given you with newspaper"? Jack says sincerely: "My understanding is that self is so easy to be understood that by others, if understanding others first,; Need if using make of to come to indicate that, self need is satisfied with so easy to".
happppylee
next week , my parents will have a business trip to Beijing . Although i have to stay at home by myself , but i think this is a good chance to prove to Mom and Dad i already can handle my daily life as well. Then, i need to working on a daily schedule first. From Monday to Friday , i think i can get up earlier by myself and cooking a delicious breakfast (maybe just only can eat ) before go to school. After school , as Mom's request, i need to go to grandma's home to have dinner and then go home to finish my homework. Before go to bed , i think i can have a hour to watch TV, No worriers , i believe i will go to sleep before 22:00. I really look forward to Mom and Dad's smile when they come back in weekend. i think they will have a big gift to me and bring me to the park which i really want to try.
