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如果你英语水平还可以的话我建议你直接用英语写，这样可以避免很多问题的发生，例如可以避免中国式英语发生的频率、可以避免逐字翻译的弊端；如果你先写好中文，会有以下弊端：1、若没有一定写作功底，语法掌握不到位的话，往往会在译成英文时出现语法错误或严重的中国式句式结构（毕竟外国和中国的文化有差异，按照中国式的翻译意思会有偏差）2、比较浪费时间；3、若碰到某个句子用中文写得很流畅而英文却不知如何表达时，那就会很烦躁，进而带来不必要的紧张情绪；其实只要平时多积累一些固定搭配的短语、连词，写作时用上去，且用上一些比较灵活的句子（从句、被动句、倒装句等），多练练，写作直接用英语写是没什么问题的。
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Li Lei 1、若没有一定写作功底，语法掌握不到位的话，往往会在译成英文时出现语法错误或严重的中国式句式结构（毕竟外国和中国的文化有差异，按照中国式的翻译意思会有偏差）2、比较浪费时间；3、若碰到某个句子用中文写得很流畅而英文却不知如何表达时，那就会很烦躁，进而带来不必要的紧张情绪；其实只要平时多积累一些固定搭配的短语、连词，写作时用上去，且用上一些比较灵活的句子（从句、被动句、倒装句等），多练练，写作直接用英语写是没什么问题的。
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《老人与海》英语书评：
The old man and the sea "book such a story, the Cuban fisherman Santiago didn't catch fish for eighty-four days, by other fishermen as failure, but his perseverance, finally caught a big marlin.
Although the fish to bite, but what also can't trample upon his valour will. This book reveals such a truth: people are not born for defeat, a man can be destroyed, but not defeated.
Before, I do what matter as long as there is not smooth, will shrink, sometimes say a few words of depressed. On study, I as long as there are several test is not very ideal, there is no confidence. After reading this book, I know my own shortcomings, learning because no longer a two not smooth and lose confidence, but the test is not good, the more should study well.
＂The old man and the sea", the lonely old fisherman Santiago is a tough guy, he embodied the spirit of value, is the ancient Greek tragedy spirit of modern echoes. In "the old man and the sea", Hemingway finally find the soul for his beloved tough guy and this spirit is unchangeable in mankind's eternal value.
译文
《老人与海》一书中有这样一个故事，古巴渔民圣地亚哥八十四天没钓到鱼，被其他渔民视为失败，但他的毅力，终于钓到了一条大马林鱼。
虽然鱼要咬人，但什么也不能践踏他的英勇意志。这本书揭示了这样一个真理：人不是为失败而生的，人可以毁灭，但不能被打败。
以前，我做什么事只要不顺利，就会退缩，有时说几句郁闷的话。在学习上，我只要有几次考试都不是很理想，就没有信心。读完这本书后，我知道了自己的缺点，因为学习不再一帆风顺而失去信心，但考试不好，更应该好好学习。
《老人与海》，孤独的老渔夫圣地亚哥是个硬汉，他所体现的精神价值，是古希腊悲剧精神与现代的呼应。在《老人与海》中，海明威终于为他心爱的硬汉找到了灵魂，这种精神在人类永恒的价值中是不变的。
那右怎样
Firstly you need to make a brief statement to the book you are evaluating and give a foreword to the jobs for the evaluation. Second thing to list digest from the book by whole structure, to show the readers what is the core value of the book. Third you are doing advance job for the author, to make some conflicts with the book and let people who around be interested. Above steps are basic ideas of evaluation of a book.
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