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英语书面表达在英语考试中并不难，但要拿高分并不容易。下面是我整理的内容，供大家参考。
写作要求：学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：
1.对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；
2.她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
3.作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作；
4.所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。
5.我希望……
要求：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数90个左右；3.第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。
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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
（1）The Hero in My Heart
As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.
（2）Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies.She often helps her parents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday;many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party. Some of them willask their parents for some money to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s agood idea, because that’ll cost her parents’ money. I’m going to make abirthday card for her by myself. I’m sure she’ll like it.
（3）How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
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如下：
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially in foreign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, there is indeed too much work to do.
If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs by paying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, some staffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought to help them to improve their working efficiency.
If they are still not qualified, boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That's all what I think about working overtime.
如今，加班在很多公司都很常见，尤其是外企、私企和合资企业。我认为加班主要有两个原因。一是，确实有太多的工作要做。
如果是这样，老板应该通过支付加班工资或给员工假期来补偿员工。二是，一些员工并不适合他们的职位。在这种情况下，老板应该帮助他们提高工作效率。如果他们仍然无法满足岗位需求，老板可能要给他们更换职位，或者最糟糕的情况，解雇他们。这就是我对加班的看法。
祖国的砖。
My holiday life is very wonderful.Don't you believe?Now let me show you my good life.Every morning I get up early .After taking sports,I eat a nice breakfast.Then I alaways go over books.Sometimes I will go out with my good friends.I also play computer.How? Is my life wonderful?Do you like it?
