shop移民Shero
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独行欧洲
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华蓥山5
Wolf was a bright dog.It looked like a wolf,but many children were afraid of it.However,Wolf was always quite and friendly with people,and it could help its owner do many things,too. Its owner had a little boy aged at five.On a snowy day,the boy was lost in the snow.The owner became very worried.Wolf went out to search in the snow.Suddenly,Wolf stopped to dig the snow.A moment later,they saw the boy's face.It got close to the boy and warmed him up.After while,the boy woke up.
孤星马哥
I often dream of becoming a teacher,standing on the platform in the classroom and giving lessons to lovely boys and girls. I will teach them, play with them, and watch them growing up. I know it is not easy to be a respecting teacher. First I have to learn in order to teach. With so much knowledge, I can never teach well. What is more, I have to be friendly with my pupils and take good care of them. This is the only way to become a good teacher who wins respect from his students. I am a student now I will work hard to make my dream come true.