在线英语改错

one summer,I volunteered to (work) in a public library.___It was (a) very interesting experience during which I met a great___(number) of persons and tried new things.____I worked to help with the library's reading program 打钩by entering the (names) of children who had signed up into____the library's computer system.I also helped (teach) computer___skills.(It) was necessary for them to master the skills.____(When) the program was finished,I received a letter____and small gifts (for) my services,and I was happy to have made___someone's life () better through my efforts. _____

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1 把working 改为work.2在very 前加a 因为是经历experience是就可数。3deal改为number因为deal of后接不可数4对的5去掉into因为前面有enter 其有进入的意思。但是我又觉得name好像应该是要用复数。不确定6taught改为原型。help后接原型。7.that改为it形式主语。8.though,改为after因该是事后感谢人逻辑问题9of改为for.10.去掉more重复了。自己做的难免有点错误但可以借鉴

Dear Tom, Are you surprised to hear from me?I have not heard from you since the summer holidays began.How are you getting on with your sisters?How are your parents?Has your brother Bill come back from Canada already? My stamp collection is getting bigger and bigger.I collected stamps of more than forty different countries.In my stamp album,I usually put the stamps from the same country altogether.I have a penpal from Britan.She gave me some building stamps.My American teacher has given me some beautiful American and Canadian stamps.I'm glad to know you are going to give me some foreign stamps,but I have not accepted the stamps yet.Have you sent it yet? Please write to me soon. Yours, Zhou Wen

1 you 改为your2 tiredly改为tired 3 去掉 was4 while 改为when5 if 改为whether

1. you 改成 your.2. tiredly 改成 tired，用形容词作表语。另外，句子结尾你可能漏打一个单词 last (night).3. was 去掉。be used to do 被用来做某事；used to do 过去常常做某事。4. while 改成 when。固定句型 be about to do sth. ... when ...正要去做某事，突然......5. If 改成 Whether。主语从句表示“是否”含义，常用 whether 引导，尤其在句子开头，不能用 if。 祝你进步！