杜小样丶
这篇作文应该可以得到22,23 左右,写得不错.下面将修改后的发出,自己比较揣摩一下. Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is "Thoughts on becoming a grown-up". Since I was an innocent child, I have been constantly longing for adulthood. With the development of my intelligence, my desire to turn into an adult grows increasingly strong. Besides, what I have been dreaming of is the freedom and independence I would have were I an adult. At present, as I'll become a grown-up soon, it occurs to me that growing up not only means gaining more freedom but also requires taking up more responsibilities. Therefore, in order to satisfy the requirements, I'm determined to build up a strong sense of responsibility, for which I am willing to participate in more social activities and lead a busy yet colorful life. Thank you for listening. 关于草稿问题,我认为可以列个提纲帮助思考.另外,卷面整洁很重要,想好再下笔.不要涂抹.字体不能太小,扫描后不清楚.段落要分好.
