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Hello, everyone! My name is Lucy. I’m five years old. I come from big class of fengdan kindergarden. I love English very much. Now, (here is)a little story for you: The Blue Wooden Cabin in the Forest There was an old beautiful blue wooden cabin in the forest with a river running around it. The flowers were beautiful and the grass was green there. A fox said: “I love its green grass. I love to play on it!” A duck said: “I love the clean river. I like to swim in it.” One day, a man from the city found this beautiful place. He shouted: “Oh! What a beautiful blue wooden cabin! I love it! I shall tell other people in the city.” “Beep! Beep!”Lots of people rushed to the cabin by bus. They shouted: “What a beautiful place! Let’s sing and dance!” They made a big noise in the forest. All of the animals are afraid to come out! In the evening, all the people went home. The animals came out and they found everything had been changed! The blue wooden cabin was so dirty and the trash smelled awful. The fox became very angry. He said: “It is too dirty. I can’t live here. I shall move!” The duck said: “I can’t swim in such a dirty river. I shall move, too!” The elephant said: “Stay, your people. This is our home. Come on, everybody. Let’s clean up the garbages together!” The next day, the people found all the animals were cleaning up the trash. They said“I am so Sorry! Let’s clean up the trash together!” Finally, the blue wooden cabin was clean again. The animals and human live together.Because the environment belongs to everyone! That’s all, thank you!
尼古丁00144
嘿嘿，各位大佬大家莫怪，综合以上三位的意见，结合自己的看法，全文修订如下，如有不当敬请谅解，多多包涵！Hello everyone here. My name is Lucy and I come from big class of Fengdan kindergarten. Currently, I'm five years and enjoy learning English very much. Here, I'd like to share a great story to you:The Blue Wooden Cabin in the ForestThere is an old beautiful blue wooden cabin in the forest. A clean river runs around it and there are many beautiful flowers and lots of green grass near it. All the animals like this clean, beautiful place.The fox says: “I love the beautiful flowers. I love to play on the grass!”The duck says: “I like the clean river. I like to swim in it.”One day. A man from the city finds this beautiful place. He shouts: “Oh! What a beautiful blue wooden cabin! I like it! I’ll tell others in the city.”“Beep! Beep!” Many people come here by bus. They shout: “What a beautiful place! Let’s sing and dance!” They make a big noise in the forest. All of the animals are afraid to go out!In the evening, all the people go home. The animals come out and find that everything has changed.The blue wooden cabin is very dirty. The garbage smells terrible.The fox is very angry, “It is very dirty. I can’t live here. I’ll move my house!”The duck says: “I can’t swim in the dirty river. I’ll move my house, too!”The elephant says: “Don’t move your houses. This is our home. Come on everybody. Let’s clean up the garbage together!”The next day. The people find all the animals are cleaning up the garbage. They say “Sorry! Sorry! Let’s clean up the garbage together!”In the end, the blue wooden cabin is clean again. All the animals and human live together happily ever after.That’s all, a good story, right? Thank you!楼上的小朋友，非常抱歉，惹你生气了；我只是想整理一个完整的答案给楼主而已，Very Sorry！ 另外，善意提示一下，你自幼在加拿大生活，有很多英文简写在国内不太易明白。像u代替You还能想到，开场白就是你的I really前面的三句吗，kindergarten后面就接The blue woooden......么？ Sorry，下面你写的我就更难理解了：1、c'mon是Come on!？2、gr.是Grade.？3、wtf...？4、FU...？！（小姑娘？）5、sooooo...这是语气加强吗？6、ASSHOLD...？！ 小姑娘啊，我当然不会怪你；恕我冒昧，如果我没有误会的话，西方/加拿大的青少年文化涵养都是这样修炼的吗。。。 以上，盼你回复，Tks！ Rgds！
维尼yuan
BringItallBack找回自己Don'tstop,nevergiveup,HoldyourheadhighReachthetop.Lettheworldseewhatyouhavegot,Bringitallbacktoyou.Holdonwhatyoutrytobe,Yourindividuality.Whentheworldisonyourshoulders,Justsmileandletitgo.Ifpeopletrytoputyoudown,Justwalkonby,don'tturnaround,Youonlyhavetoanswertoyourself.Don'tyouknowit'struewhattheysay,Thatlife,itisn'teasy,Butyourtime'scomingaround,Sodon'tyoustoptrying.Dreamoffallinginlove,Anythingyou'vebeenthinkingof,Whentheworldseemstogettootough,Bringitallbacktoyou.Trynottoworry'boutathing.Enjoythetimeslifecanbring.Keepitallinsideyou,Gottaletthefeelingsshow.Imaginationisthekey,'Causeyouareyourowndestiny.Younevershouldbelonely,Whentimeisonyourside.Don'tyouknowit'struewhattheysay,Thingsaresenttotryyou.Butyourtime'scomingaround,Sodon'tyoustoptrying.Don'tyouknowit'struewhattheysay,Thingshappenforareason.Butyourtime'scomingaround,Sodon'tyoustoptrying.[参考译文]不要停顿，永不放弃，高昂起头到达顶峰。让世界看见你的收获，找回自己。坚持自己想达到的境地，坚持自我。当世界的重担压到了你的肩头时，笑一笑，让它去。如果有人打击你，走过去，不要回头，你只须负责自己。难道你不知道他们说的是真的，生活，不容易，但你的时机将会来到，千万别停滞不进取。梦想自己坠入了情网，自己想过的任何事情，当世界仿佛变得太艰难时，找回自己。努力不为任何事担忧，享受生活能带来的好时光。让这一切留在你心里，得让自己的感情流露。幻想就是答案，因为你就是自己的命运。你永远不必孤独，当时间支持着你。难道你不知道他们说的是真的，这些事都是为了考验你。但你的时机将会来到，千万别停滞不进取。难道你不知道他们说的是真的，事情发生都有道理。但你的时机将会来到，千万别停滞不进取。
雁归来无痕
Belllittle bell,very warm,guests come,Dingling Dingling,Smile to them and say"Welcome !Welcome!"门玲小门玲,真热情,客人来了,丁零,丁零,笑对客人说:欢迎,欢迎
布川依夫
1.“六一”儿童节(英文)Forever young by Various artistsLet's dance in styleLet's dance for a whileHeaven can waitWe're only watching the skiesHoping for the bestBut expecting the worstAre you going to drop the bomb or notLet us die young or let us live foreverWe don't have the powerBut we never say neverSitting in a sandpitLife is a short tripThe music's for the sad men 英语词汇网Can you imagineWhen this race is wonTurn our golden faces into the sunPraising our leadersWe're getting in tuneThe music's played by the madmenForever youngI want to be forever youngDo you really want to live foreverForever and everForever youngI want to be forever youngDo you really want to live foreverForever youngSome are like waterSome are like the heatSome are a melody and some are the beatSooner or laterThey all will be goneWhy don't they stay youngIt's so hard to get old without a causeI don't want to perish like a fading horseYouth's like diamonds in the sunAnd diamonds are foreverSo many adventures couldn't happen todaySo many songs we forgot to playSo many dreams swinging out of the blueWe'll let them come trueForever youngI want to be forever youngDo you really want to live foreverForever and ever2.Belllittle bell,very warm,guests come,Dingling Dingling,Smile to them and say"Welcome !Welcome!"门玲小门玲,真热情,客人来了,丁零,丁零,笑对客人说:欢迎,欢迎3.Every dayEvery day I need you LordBut this day especially,I need some extra strengthTo face what ever is to be.This day more than any dayI need to feel you near,To fortify my courageAnd to overcome my fear.By myself, I cannot meetThe challenge of the hour,There are times when humans help,But we need a higher powerTo assist us bear what must be borne,and so dear Lord, I pray -Hold on to my trembling handAnd be near me today.翻译！在线的每一天每一天我需要你主但是，这一天特别是，我需要一些额外的力量面对什么是永远。这一天，超过任何一天我需要觉得你靠近，为了巩固我的勇气并克服我的恐惧。由我自己，我不能满足我们面临的挑战的时刻，有些时候人的帮助，但是，我们需要更高的权力为了协助我们承担什么必须承担，所以亲爱的上帝，我祈祷-坚持我的颤抖的手并靠近我今天。
