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1. 向顾客推销商品Dear Sir: May 1, 2001Inquiries regarding our new product, the Deer Mountain Bike, have been coming in from all parts of the world.Reports from users confirm what we knew before it was put on the market - that it is the best mountain bike available. Enclosed is our brochure.Yours faithfully2. 提出询价Dear Sir: Jun.1, 2001We received your promotional letter and brochure today. We believe that your would do well here in the U.S.A. Kindly send us further details of your prices and terms of sale. We ask you to make every effort to quote at competitive prices in order to secure our business. We look forward to hearing from you soon..Truly3. 迅速提供报价Dear Sir: June 4, 2001Thank you for your inquiry of June the 1st concerning the Deer Mountain Bike. It gives us great pleasure to send along the technical information on the model together with the catalog and price list. After studying the prices and terms of trade, you will understand why we are working to capacity to meet the demand. We look forward to the opportunity of being of service of you.交易的契机4. 如何讨价还价Dear Sir: June 8, 2001We have received your price lists and have studied it carefully. However, the price level in your quotation is toohigh for this market, If you are prepared to grant us a discount of 10% for a quantity of 200, we would agree to your offer. You should note that some price cut will justify itself by an increase in business. We hope to hear from you soon.Yours truly5-1 同意进口商的还价Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We have accepted your offer on the terms suggested. Enclosed our will find a special price list that we believe will meet your ideas of prices. You should note that the recent advances in raw materials have affected the cost of this product unfavorably. However, for your order we have kept our prices down.Sincerely5-2 拒绝进口商的还价Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We regret that we cannot meet your terms. We must point out that the falling market here leaves us little or no margin of profit. We must ask you for a keener price in respect to future orders. At present the best discount offered for a quantity of 200 is 5%. Our current situation leaves us little room to bargain. We hope you will reconsider the offer.Truly6. 正式提出订单Dear Sir: June 15, 2001We have discussed your offer of 5% and accept it on the terms quoted. We are prepared to give your product a trial, provided you can guarantee delivery on or before the 20th of September. The enclosed order is given strictly on this condition. We reserve the right of refusal of delivery and/or cancellation of the order after this date.Truly7. 确认订单Dear Sir: June 20, 2001Thank you very much for your order of June 15 for 200 Deer Mountain Bikes. We will make every possible effort to speed up delivery. We will advise you of the date of dispatch. We are at your service at all times.Sincerely8. 请求开立信用证Gentlemen: June 18, 2001Thank you for your order No. 599. In order to execute it, please open an irrevocable L/C for the amount of US$ 50,000 in our favor. This account shall be available until Sep. 20. Upon arrival of the L/C we will pack and ship the order as requested.Sincerely9. 通知已开立信用证Dear Sir: June 24, 2001Thank you for your letter of June 18 enclosing details of your terms. According to your request for opening an irrevocable L/C, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank to open a credit for US$ 50,000 in your favor, valid until Sep. 20. Please advise us by fax when the order has been executed.Sincerely10. 请求信用证延期Dear Sir： Sep. 1, 2001We are sorry to report that in spite of our effort, we are unable to guarantee shipment by the agreed date due to a strike at our factory. We are afraid that your L/C will be expire before shipment. Therefore, please explain our situation to your customers and secure their consent to extend the L/C to Sept.30.Sincerely11. 同意更改信用证Gentlemen: Sept. 5, 2001We received your letter today and have informed our customers of your situation. As requested, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank to extend the L/C up to and including September 30. Please keep us abreast of any new development.Sincerely
linlin0530
商务写作范文：如何来写订单
1. 文体介绍
订货（order）是买方为要求供应具体数量的货物而提出的一种要求。此时，交易双方之间的陌生感已消除，可以说已经度过了接触障碍和难关。
写定货信时应注意以下几点：
（1）开头就直接说明订购的意图。
（2）订货信一般应包括：商品的名称、品质、数量、包装、价格条件、支付条件以及需要对方提供的单据等。
（3）内容必须准确、清楚。不论是商品的价格还是商品的规格都应做到准确无误，否则会带来不必要的损失与麻烦。
卖方收到订货电子邮件后必须进行确认。如果卖方无法提供买方所需要的货物，则最好介绍一些合适的替代品；如果买方所需货物的价格和规格发生了变化，卖方则提出还价并劝买方接受，但要注意：写拒绝接受订货的信时，必须非常谨慎，应为日后有可能的.交易留下余地。
2.实用范例
（1）
Subject： An order
Gentlemen：
The price quotes contained in your E-mail of May 20，2002 gained favorable attention with us.
We would like to order the following items consisting of various colors， patterns and assortments：
Large 2000 dozen
Medium 4000 dozen
Small 2000 dozen
As the sales season is approaching， the total order quantity should be shipped in July. At that time an irrevocable L/C for the total purchase value will be opened.
Please confirm the order and E-mail a shipping schedule.
Sincerely，
Xxx
主题：订货
先生们：
2002年5月20日电子邮件报价深受欢迎。
我拟选各种颜色、式样、品种的衬衫如下：
大号 2000打
中号 4000打
小号 2000打
售季将至，全部货物应于7月登轮。届时全额不可撤销信用证将予以开出。请确认订货，用电子邮件告知装运时间表。
真诚的，xxx
（2）
Subject： Out of Stock
Dear Sir，
We thank you for your Order No.222 received this morning for 8000 dozen cotton shirts， but regret to have to disappoint you.
At present we have no stock of shirts in the size required and do not expect further deliveries for at least another five weeks. Before then you may have been to obtain the shirts elsewhere， but if not we will notify you immediately our new stocks come in.
Yours faithfully，
Xxx
主题；缺货
亲爱的先生：
我们今早接到贵方222号订单，定购8000打棉质衬衫，十分感谢。但可能要使贵方失望了，十分抱歉。
目前我们没有贵方所需尺寸的衬衫存货，而且至少在5个星期内亦不会有货。在此期间贵方可从别处购买衬衫，如未能购到，一旦新货运到，我们定当立即通知贵方。
3.典型句型
a.We have pleasure in sending you an order for Cosmetics.
我们愉快的给贵方寄去化妆品订单。
b.We want the goods to be of exactly the same quality as that of those you previously supplied us.
我们希望此批订货质量与以前供应的完全一样。
c.Please supply …… in accordance with the detail in our order No……
请照我方第……号订单供货。
d.This is a trial order. Please send us 50 sets only so that we may tap the market. If successful， we will give you large orders in the future.
试订50台，以开发市场。如果成功，随后必将大量订购。
e.This order must be filled within five weeks， otherwise we will have to cancel the order.
此订单须在5周内交货，否则我方将不得不撤销此单。
f.We hope our products will satisfy you and that you will let us have the chance of serving you again.
希望我方产品是你们满意，今后再来惠顾。
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您好，我教你: W: Hello!Can I help you .P: Hello!I want to order some food,please.W: We have many kinds of food here. What would you like?P: I'd like 16 mutton and carrot dumplings, some tomato soup, chicken, fish and cabbage.W: OK. Would you like anything to drink?P: Yes, I'd like a large green tea and a small orange juice. W: OK.Your address, please.P: 15 Peace Road.W: May I know your telephone number?P: Certainly. It's 398-2886.
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