英语作文怎么改

There are four seasons in a year:spring, summer, autumn and winter. 一年有四季，春夏秋冬Each season hasthree months.改为Each season lasts three months. 每季有3个月或改为there be结构There are three months in spring: March, April and May 一直用一种结构不好改为 March, April and May belong to spring 三四五月属于春天I like spring best, because there are so many beautiful things.我最爱春天，因为物美于春like... best如果是初中的话可以接受，高中不建议。things 从词汇上来说不要用，英语里事物别用 thing ，极其chinglish。我给你种参考句型Everything in spring look like more vivid and That's why I like spring best. 春天万物生机勃勃，是我最爱春天的理由。In spring, the weather starts to warm up, days and nights are neither too long nor too short.春日，温度回暖，昼日均衡。你这句我怀疑是翻译机翻的。老师根本不可能这么教你，怎么翻法你自己翻了我才能帮你。建议重写I hate the cold wind of winter, I don’t like the hot son of summer, I dislike mud and dirt caused by the rains.我讨厌冬日寒风与夏日炎炎，同样不爱雨后溅起的污泥结构极差。建议改成 I do not like cold wind in winter or hot sun in summer, especially the dirty mud splashed by rains.In spring, the sun shins brightly, our world is covered with green trees and colorful flowers,春日，阳光明媚，我们的世界充满绿树与红花。语法问题，两句话不能用逗号隔开，要直接句号。shine 要变shines（无需去e）be covered with 被...覆盖 这里用的极其不好不如用 be full of 充满 或者用别的there are many butterflies and bees over the flowers, the butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. 花丛中的许多蝴蝶和蜜蜂，它们在飞舞和歌唱语法上，老问题，两个句子一定要句号隔开，逗号是绝对错误的！在花丛中，用among 或者 in 看情况而定，但用over 是绝对不可以的。。。LZ你的文章每句话都有问题，我改不动了，太累了。。。才10分，满意就采纳吧。