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一、作文开头万能句1、Withthedevelopmentoftechnologyandscience,随着科学技术的发展(后面一定要接句子,不能单独使用)Withthegrowth\progressoftechnologyandscience=Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology.2、ConsideringtheworseningsituationinChina,attentionmustbepouredintoprotectingtheenvironment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况,环境保护需要引起更多的重视。)3、ThefirstfiveyearsofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingdevelopmentofChina.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。)Astheglobaleconomygrowsatafeverpitch,……4、Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorableandprevalentphenomenoninChina.5、Therearegrowingconcernfor……6、Inrecentyears,itiscommontosee\hearthat……7、Thereisageneraltendencythat……(有一种趋势)二、作文内容的陈述结构inthefirstplace/secondly/ontopofthat以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。〔原文〕Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.〔修正〕Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.〔原文〕Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.〔修正〕Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。①强调句〔原文〕Imethiminthestreetyesterday.〔修正〕ItwasinthestreetthatImethimyesterday.ItwasyesterdaythatImethiminthestreet.②由with或without引导的短语。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.③分词短语。如:Satisfiedwiththeresult,Hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.④倒装句。如:Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.Notonlyshouldwestudyinthecollege,butalsolearnhowtobeadecentperson.⑤省略句。如:Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。〔原文〕Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔修正〕Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.〔原文〕Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.〔修正〕Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。4.学会使用过渡词。如:①递进:then(然后),besides(还有),furthermore(而且),moreover(此外)等。②转折:however(然而),but(但是),onthecontrary(相反),afterall(毕竟)等。③总结:finally(最后),atlast(最后),inbrief(总之),inconclusion(最后)等。④强调:indeed(确实),certainly(一定),surely(确定),aboveall(尤其)等。⑤对比:inthesameway(同样地),justas(正如),ontheonehand…ontheotherhand(一方面……另一方面……)等。相似的比较:similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比较:ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith…,5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:〔原文〕Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.〔修正〕Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:〔原文〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.〔修正〕Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Ilikereadingwhilewatchingtelevisionappealstomybrother.三、结尾1、Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……(比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.)2、Therefore,it’snotdifficulttodrawaconclusionthat……3、Asaresult,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)4、Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayconcludethat……5、Obviously(此为过渡短语),wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.四、一些用法1、陈述个人的观点Itisallegedthat(据说)Inmyview,bothsidesarepartlyright(两方面都部分的正确)AsfarasIamconcerned(就我而言)AsregardstomeMyownpointofviewisthat……Personally,Ibelievethat……Myexperiencetellsmethat……Theinventionofthehandset,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeatremendoushit.Theapplicationofwebsites,Idaretosay,turnsouttobeagreatlyhit.ItcomesasnosurprisethatChineseeconomybecomesincreasinglyhot.2、陈述别人的观点Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat……(错误的观点)sbisunderthefalsebeliefthat……3、图表作文Thetableshows\indicates\revealsthat……(表明、暗示、揭示)Accordingtothestatisticsshowinginthatgraph,wecaneasliysee\found……(根据表中的数据,我们可以看见,发现)Asseenfromthechart/AsisportrayedinthepictureSaleswentintoaslightdecline=salesdeclinedslightly(小幅下降)Salesdeclineddramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely(大幅下降)Abriefglimpseatourcampus(thepicture/cartoon/caricature)vividlyshowsthatmobilephone,becomingmoreandmoreprevalent.五、好的替代themachine\thedevice代替computerhandset代替cellphone*TheMiddleKingdom代替Chinaintensely\cruciallyimportant代替veryimportant(itiscruciallyimportantthatthebenefitsofcollectivebeonourpriority.)approaches代替wayscurrent(currently)代替nowgrowingindividuals代替moreandmorepeopleindividuals/characters/folks代替people,personspositive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,代替goodunfavorable,poor,adverse,ill代替badanarmyof,anoceanof,amultitudeof代替many,alotoftaketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat代替thinkaffair,business,matter代替thingformypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinionbeneficial,rewarding代替helpfulexceedingly,extremely,intensely代替verypourattentioninto代替payattentiontobearinmindthat代替rememberenjoy,possess代替havetonameonlyafew/asanexample代替forexample/instance六、常用短语老年人theold\elderly\aged\elderlypopulation\seniorcitizens年轻人youth\youngster\youngadults\adolescent中年人middleadults网吧cybercafé网虫mousepotato电视迷couchpotato优秀的学生outstanding/superior/rare/topstudents坏的影响illeffects农村rural郊区suburban城里urban在当代社会incontemporarysociety双赢awin-winsituation双输alose-losesituation建设有中国特色的社会主义buildsocialismwithChinesecharacteristics,formaeconomicsystemwithChinesecharacteristics七、写信中IwouldappreciateitverymuchIfyou……Iamthrilledtoreceiveyourmail.Lookingforwardtoapromptresponse.八、好的短语1、havegrowingrespectfor越来越重视Coincidentwiththefastgrowingeconomy,Chinahasgrowingrespectforprotectingtheenvironmentandcontrollingpopulation.随着经济的迅速发展,中国也越来越重视环境保护和控制人口了。2、enablesbtodosth(使某人可以做某事)Itenableustobuildaharmonioussociety.3、另外Inaddition/Additionally/ontopofthatAdditionally,thereisanotherreasonfortheappearanceofthisphenomenon.(现象)九、好的句子Therealpowerresidesinthepeople.(真正的权力属于人民)Wemustfightagainstthebureaucracyinordertoimprovegovernmentalwork.(为了提高政府部门的工作效率,我们必须与官僚作风作斗争。)Litterbylittle,ourknowledgewillbeenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.(慢慢的,我们的知识会充实,我们的视野会开阔。)Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.(常言道,任何事物都有两面的。)也可以用everyswordhastwoedges.Everythinghasbothdarksidesandbrightsides.TaiwanisanintegralpartofChina.(台湾是中国不可分割的一部分。)十、最简单的格式Coincidentwiththefastgrowingnationaleconomy,thereexistsanunfavorable坏的现象(favorable好的现象)andprevalentphenomenoninChina.Itisestimatedthat(相关数据,例如:eightoutoftenindividualspossessahandset十个人中有八个有手机了).Whyhavetherebeensomany(某种现象)Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Firstly/inthefirstplace(原因一).Besides,/secondly(原因二).Ontopofthat/additionally(原因三).themaincauseof(某种现象)isdueto(最主要原因).Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,(解决办法一).Ontheotherhand,(解决办法二).Allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof(某种现象).Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,that……(比如说到和谐社会Allinall,whatreallymattersis,infact,thatweshouldbuildoursocietyaharmonioussociety.)Manyseniormiddleschoolstudentsdevotealargesliceoftheirleisuretimetoplayingwebgames./toplantedthemselvesinfrontofthecomputer.Thosedayswhenthecellphone,initiallyabrickshapeitem,wasthesourceoftheprideoftherich,aresomethingofthepast.Thosedayswhenthecar,initiallyatoolonlyforauthorities,arelonggone.Therehasbeenanunshakabletruthformostpeoplethatacademicdegreeandone’sabilityiscomplementaryeachother.Onesadfactabouthumannatureisthatwedon’tseemtoappreciatewhatwehavetillit’sgone.Computercanfunctionindisserveofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallyviolence,AV-films,pornpictures.Privatecarsalsofunctioninthedisserveofhumanbeings,especiallypollution,consumptionofenergyandtraffic.Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computerdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’slives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet/aspect.阅读理解中subjective(主观)subjective(客观)should后面是观点,重点把握完形填空选不出来就填转折,关注第一句话,定语从句,which后面的信息很重要,用副词开头,后面是专家或作者的观点(情态动词也一样)

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高中住在家里,安静舒适的环境有利于我们进行英语作文的写作。下面是我给大家整理的高中英语经典范文,供大家参阅!

The Time of A Date

The time of a date has different standard for boys and girls. Girls always like to be late for about ten minutes while boys always reach the destination on time. If the girls are earlier than the boys, then the situation will become awkward, it is not polite to let a girl wait for a boy. But sometimes girls are always late for more than half an hour, which annoys the boys. It is said that if you call a girl to ask her if she is on the way, then she will answer you that she just goes out of the house, the truth is that she is still in the house. Most girls are late for making up for a long time. It is considerate to be late for a date for a few minutes, but it is impolite to be late for much time.

约会的时间对男孩和女孩来说有不同的标准。女孩总是喜欢迟到大约十分钟,而男孩总是准时到达目的地。如果女孩比男孩早,那么情形就会变得尴尬,这是不礼貌的,让一个女孩等待一个男孩。但有时女孩总是迟到超过半小时,这让男孩子感到烦恼。据说如果你打电话问一个女孩她是否在路上,然后她会回答你,她已经出门了,事实上,她还在房子里。大多数女孩都因为化妆而迟到。约会迟到几分钟是可以体谅的,但迟到太多时间就是不礼貌的。

Is Dink Acceptable

In Chinese traditional view, it is unacceptable for people not to have offspring, because they will be looked down upon and the family will feel shameful. But in the modern society, the young generation gets the foreign education and they think in the open way. Some people start to think about being a dink, because they like freedom and want enjoy life. Having children not only costs time and money, but also needs to take great responsibility. You have to take care of the children and set the good example, it is the lifetime mission. Once being a dink, then you are free to go anywhere and live for yourself. As people are under great pressure, more young people have the idea to be a dink. It is their choice and if they are not ready to be a parent, then be a dink.

在中国的传统观念,人们没有后代是不可接受的,因为他们会被人瞧不起,家人会感到羞耻。但在现代社会中,年轻一代接受外国教育,他们思维比较开放。一些人开始思考成为丁克一族,因为他们喜欢自由,想要享受生活。生孩子不仅花费时间和金钱,但也需要承担巨大的责任。你必须照顾孩子,树立了良好的榜样,这是一生的使命。一旦成为丁克,你可以去任何地方,为自己而活。如今人们活在巨大的压力下,越来越多的年轻人有想法成为丁克族。这是他们的选择,如果他们没有准备好成为一个家长,然后做丁克族吧。

The New Canteen

Many students are not satisfied with the canteen in their schools, so they order the fast-food outside the campus. But the problem comes, some of them feel sick after eating fast-food, so the schools have taken some action to forbid students to order fast-food. A lot of students complain about the right to choose food. Our principal hear students’ voice, he had promised to improve the food choices and make students eat better. A semester passed, the principal had kept his words, a new canteen was built and students were happy to see the new food. Students can make better food choice, there are many delicious food that they have never met before. Now , students no longer go out to eat, they love the food in canteen. This is a win-win situation, students give up complaining and speak highly of their principal.

许多学生不满意学校的食堂,所以他们预定校园外的快餐。但问题来了,有些人吃快餐后感觉不舒服,所以学校已经采取了一些行动,禁止学生订购快餐。很多学生抱怨选择食物的权力。我们的校长听到学生的声音,他承诺改善食物的菜式,让学生吃得更好。一个学期过去了,校长遵守承诺,一个新的食堂建成了,学生乐于看到新的菜谱。学生可以更好的选择食物,有很多美味的样式,他们从来没有见过。现在,学生不再出去吃饭,他们喜欢食堂的食物。这是一个双赢的局面,学生放弃抱怨,赞扬他们的校长。

Other People’s Parents

Recently, the hot show Where Are You Going, Dad came to the screen again, the show have many fans because of the popularity of last season. Every season, the audience will see the samll lovely kids, all of them have their features. The show had made some changes and not all the kids are celebrities’. A little girl and a young handsome athlete made up the group, after a few days’ communication, the little girl liked her new father a lot and she told him that she liked him more than her mother. The young man asked the reason, the girl said her mother sometimes would get angry because of her mistake. The girl was favored by the audience, everybody spoke highly of her, there was no doubt that her mother educated her so well. Sometimes we think other people’s parents are best, actually, our parents are the best.

最近,热门节目《爸爸去哪儿》又在屏幕上播了,这个节目有很多粉丝,因为上一季的深受欢迎。每一季,观众都会看到小小的可爱孩子,他们都有各自的特点。这个节目做了一些改变,并不是所有的孩子都是名人的孩子。一个小女孩和一个年轻英俊的运动员组队,经过几天的交流,这个小女孩非常喜欢她的新父亲,她告诉他,她喜欢他胜过她的母亲。年轻人问原因,女孩说她的母亲有时会生气,因为她的错误。观众喜爱这个女孩,每个人都高度评价她,毫无疑问,她的母亲把她教育得很好。有时我们认为别人的父母是最好的,事实上,我们的父母是最好的。

Every year, the world is keeping their eyes on the Nobel Prize in literature, the winner will gain the fame and fortune and making his writing career reach the top. Chinese culture has more than 5 thousand years’ history and there are many great works that famous around the world. So why Chinese writers have such a long way to win the Nobel Prize. The most obvious factor is the language. English as the international language is accepted by the world and Chinese great works need to be translated into English, so as to be read by the judges. But the bad thing is that during the translation, the artistic conception has loss in some way and only the main meaning is left. So we don’t need to question about our literature, it is excellent and some day the world will see it.

每年,全世界都在关注着诺贝尔文学奖,获胜者将获得名誉和财富,让他的写作生涯达到顶峰。中国文化有5000多年的历史,有许多伟大的作品,闻名于世界。为什么中国作家在获得诺贝尔奖这条路上走了那么久。最明显的因素是语言。英语作为国际语言被世界所接受,中国的伟大作品也需要翻译成英文,这样评委才能看得懂。但糟糕的是,在翻译的过程中,意境在某种程度上受到损失,只剩下的主要意思。所以我们不要质疑我们的文学,它是优秀的,总有一天世界会看到。

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