英文改正错误句子

1.The fact （is）that education is the key to everyone’s success.2.In general,this policy cannot be made due to its damage to human's health,（and）more factors have to be taken into consideration. 3.According to the pie chart （it）clearly highlights the detailed data in 1996

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汉语里的“虽然”和“但是”可以连用，但是英语不可同时出现故可以把“but”或者“although”去掉

1、although去掉；2、troubles and risks；3、keeped改成kept.

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1. 这样写的话，that 引导的是 the fact 的同位语从句，构不成句子，应该把它变成表语从句，改为 The fact is that education is the key to everyone’s success 2. this policy cannot be made due to its damage to human's health 和 more factors have to be taken into consideration 是并列句，中间缺少并列连词，应该改为 In general, this policy cannot be made due to its damage to human's health and more factors have to be taken into consideration. 3. According to the pie chart 是介词短语，不能充当主语，应该改为 The pie chart clearly highlights the detailed data in 1996.

1. on 改成 in 生病卧床in bed 是固定搭配2.去掉go前面的to you'd better do something3.fishes 改成 fish当鱼在河里游时fish 是单复数同形；当鱼儿成了桌上的佳肴则要用可数4.begin 改成begins june 改June（有可能是你打错了）summer是第三人称单数，这里考的是主谓一致5.make 改成 making 女孩正在堆雪人，表达的是正在发生的事情，要用一般现在进行时，因此用making

翻译错误不少：Although we have encountered some trouble and risk in the course of our advance successfully solved.有从句，没主语，没主句; trouble换成difficultiesAlthough we encountered some difficulties and risks in the course of our advance, we have successfully solved them.建议用现在完成时, keeped应该是keptWe not only have not caused social unnrest but have also greatly liberated and developed social productive forces and kept social stability and overall development.