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Only a year after receiving their first music 进入查看：2022-2023学年学英语报八年级第45期答案汇总 以下内容仅作展示，图片上方文字进入查看。 Only a year after receiving their first music lessons, 16 teenagers from the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau(青藏高原) gave their first concert at a theater in Shanghai recently. During the 90-minute performance on Nov 21, the students danced, played the piano and traditional musical instruments, and sang in both Mandarin and Tibetan. For the performers from Jiuzhi county in the Guoluo Tibetan autonomous prefecture, Qinghai province, traveling to Shanghai was also the first time they had been on a plane. Many audience members praised the performance, with one saying he was immediately transported to the plateau when the teenagers started singing in their simple style. Much of the credit for the students’ achievements can be given to their teacher, Zhao Xingzhou, who has helped his students tune into their musical talents. “Mr. Zhao planted the seed of music in our hearts and I hope I can continue singing and perhaps one day become a professional singer,” said Tenzin Kunsang, 13, who played the piano and sang at the concert. She said she has always loved to sing, but had no idea of music theory and technique until Zhao came to the school.
依锦风韵
Overall, revision is about making stronger 进入查看：2022-2023英语周报高一外研版第46期答案汇总 以下内容仅作展示，图片上方文字进入查看。 As a student, part of the process of becoming a better writer is learning to revise (修改) one’s written work. You should help your child know that revision addresses organization, focus and purpose, and helps a writer decide whether he or she addresses an audience appropriately and explains his or her thoughts on a clear and logical basis. Editing is the process of reviewing a piece for errors, word choice, clarity, tone and the like. Proofreading is the final quality check for correct spelling and proper punctuation. Secondly, you need to tell your child that the writing process is made up of several steps. But advanced writers understand that a finished piece should be polished—an impossibility if that piece has not been carefully revised at least once. Your child should think of the writing process as separate steps, each of which is important: planning, outlining, writing, revising, editing, and proofreading. Thus, thirdly, you are supposed to discuss your child’s written work at the conceptual (概念的) level. If he or she is trying to make the readers believe something in an essay, it is important to ask relevant questions when revising that essay. Is the argument well thought out? How did he or she support that argument? Overall, revision is about making writing stronger. You can read a newspaper article or essay with your child, and then, ask questions—did the introduction make you want to keep reading? Was the main point clear? Pointing out areas you think were confusing or not as strong as they could be, and offer suggestions on how you would try to improve those areas.
