双学位英文作文

对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。

Reasonable allocation University spare time You just entered the university campus, is overwhelmed by an array of community organizations? When you hover over the the crowded student unions, associations of satisfied new activities, you are faced with a wide variety of student organizations outside the might have been ignorant head. Take a look at this, with great interest; see that embraced. Seniors here to tell you, into students exercise capacity; pulled over sister school you good Societies, GUANG school friend ...... you standing there, scratching your head, or go try? Well, you have to taken care of, a person's energy is limited, limited effort to unlimited club activities, results of nature is futile. The second class of societies as a university campus, not only enrich the extracurricular lives of students, it is more important to exercise and cultivate the ability of a person to provide a broad space. The colorful community activities university life a Beautiful scenery line , however, the choice of societies are also essential. First, you want to choose for their own interests and hobbies societies, where you can give full play to their own strengths and advantages. Second, the time of their curriculum and community activities stagger to arrange, try to choose the two do not conflict societies. Another point, the number of opt-societies should not be too much less than in the two try to control, prevent distracted, affect learning.While many college part-time, they strive to achieve their own economic independence while also strengthening exercise their communication and adaptability to future employment of chips. But not all of the students on part-time have a clear understanding to ignore their own position, blindly follow the trend and gone. Admittedly, part-time college students can indeed to growth some experience and insight, and to some extent, make up for the lack of classroom teaching. However, because of the part-time while ignoring the expertise learning, academic abandoned, in exchange for short-term economic interests, is not worth the candle, looking for a job in the future due to the lack of professional knowledge will is thwarted at every turn. Moreover, not all part-time and professional counterparts, college students do this part-time, in fact, is a waste of talent. The most worrying is their outlook on life and values deviate from the wrong concept of money will mislead them to go farther and farther. Is not reasonable arrangements learning and part-time, fish and bear's paw can not have both. University for three years is the golden age of learning knowledge should be the professional learning of theoretical knowledge and research in the first place, apart from learning appropriate to do some part-time work with their professional counterparts, train and exercise their practical ability.译文： 刚踏入大学校园的你，是否对琳琅满目的社团组织应接不暇？当你徘徊在人头攒动的学生会、各社团的纳新活动中，场外的你面对五花八门的学生组织也许早已懵了头。看看这个，饶有兴趣；看看那个，倾心不已。这边的学长告诉你，进学生会好，锻炼能力；那边的学姐拉着你，社团好，广交校内朋友……你站在那里，抓耳挠腮，要不都进去试试？那么,你可要慎重了，一个人的精力是有限的，把有限的精力投入到无限的社团活动中，结果自然是徒劳无功。社团作为大学校园的第二课堂，不仅能丰富同学们的课余生活，更重要的是为锻炼和培养一个人的能力提供了广阔的空间。缤纷的社团活动是大学生活的一道亮丽风景线，但是，社团的选择也是至关重要的。首先，要选择适合自己兴趣爱好的社团，在那里可以充分发挥自己的特长和优势。其次，将自己的课程设置与社团活动的时间错开来安排，尽量选择二者不相冲突的社团。还有一点，选择加入的社团数量不宜过多，尽量控制在两个以内，以免精力分散，影响学习。同时大学生兼职的很多，他们在努力实现自己经济独立的同时，也加强锻炼自己的沟通和应变能力，以增加日后就业的筹码。但并非所有的大学生都能够对兼职有明确的认识，忽略自己的定位，盲目跟风者大有人在。不可否认，通过兼职大学生的确可以增长一些阅历和见识，并在一定程度上弥补课堂教学的不足。可是，如果因为兼职而忽略专业知识的学习，以学业的荒废换取短期的经济利益，则得不偿失，日后找工作时必定会因专业学识的缺乏而四处碰壁。而且，并非所有的兼职都能与专业对口，大学生做这种兼职，其实是一种人才浪费。最让人担忧的，则是他们人生观和价值观的偏离，错误的金钱观念会误导他们走得越来越远。如果能合理安排学习与兼职，鱼与熊掌也并非不可兼得。大学三年是学习知识的黄金时期，应当把专业理论知识的学习与研究放在第一位，学习之余，适当做一些与自己专业对口的兼职工作，培养和锻炼自己的实际动手能力。