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Dear editor, Recently our class had a heated discussion on how we should deal with our used books after we graduate.Some students thought the books were unuseful.So they wanted to thorw the books.Some students wanded to send the books to others who needs them.But more than half of students wanted to sell them.I thought so.Because money could buy more useful things for us.It also could give the money to charity. Wang Tao
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