叶伟2050
第一行,过往经历应该用复数吧。第三行,expressitclearlyinEnglish第四行,study应该是不及物动词,应该改为learned,把time去掉。hardly意思是几乎不,不是刻苦。第五行,Englishspokenbeabletodo我只能找出这些。还有就是你的英文过于中国化,建议你多读英文文章,找找感觉,积累词汇,多说,多写。加油吧!
dp786639854
1. to relaxed 改成 to relax2. remember to being 改成 remember to be3. them step off 改成 them to step off4. and talk loudly 改成 or talk loudly5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember6. act polite 改成 act politely7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases8. made a effort 改成 made an effort9. deeply--deep10. do anything which 改成 do anything that11. hurting后的to去掉12. in the prison 改成 in prison所以我认为这篇文章不止10处错误。
吃出新味来
I used to love science class-all of them- 1. class改为classesbiology, chemistry, geography, physics. I think I 2. physics前加andliked those classes because I felt that it helped me 3. it改为they understand what the world works. For example, when 4. what改为how I was a child , the rain was a mystery. In one 5. ∨ class, I learn why it rained. I think science classes 6. learn改为learned clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 7. is改为aremysteries look into. What was my least favourite class? 8. look前加to That was maths. After learn the basics of the subject, 9. learn改为learning nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 10. practically改为practicalsaw how I could use it in my daily life. 二、Dear Miss Zhang, Your letter comes to us from the USA only 1.comes改为cameyesterday. We read it with a great pleasure. I'm writing 2. 去掉ato you not only for myself but for the whole class. 3. ∨As you know it, I'm monitor of the class. 4. 去掉it I'd like, first of all, express our thanks to you 5. express 前加tofor you teaching. For the last two years, we have learning 6. learning 改为learneda lot from you. Thank to your help, we've made great 7. Thank 改为 Thanksprogresses in our English study. We are determined 8. progresses 改为progressto do still well in the future. We hope to hear from 9. well 改为betteryou as often as possibly. 10. possibly改为possible Good luck to you.原文中有个别拼写错误,我已根据文章意思做了改动,改后的文章保证百分百正确,请楼主放心。Good luck to you!
michelle850322
根据文章顺序,更改如下:1. to relaxed 改成 to relax2. remember to being 改成 remember to be3. them step off 改成 them to step off4. and talk loudly 改成 nor talk loudly5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember6. act polite 改成 act politely7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases8. made a effort 改成 made an effort9. do anything which 改成 do anything that10. in the prison 改成 in prison保证准确率!
luanqiqing
1.Howcanyouspeechsuccessfully?(your是形容词这里不可以要用名词you)2.Here aresomeadvices(advices是复数)3possibly改成possible(这个是副词,要变为形容词)4.it去掉(这里不需要宾语)5audience改为复数加个s 后面把is改成are(因为这里不止一个观众)6either改为neither(neither....nor...意为既不。。也不。。)希望我的回答能对你有所帮助
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