英语小作文贷款

Dear Sir/Madame,I am a sophomore in Shanghai University, majoring in computer software. In the previous one and a half years I have been a model student and monitor of my class.However, since I registered here, the expenses have become a burden for my average family. You know, my parents are both laid-off workers, and, to make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. It will be beyond their ability to finance me through my remaining education. It is now a must for me to help relieve their financial pressure. So I’m applying to your bank for a loan of 10,000 yuan. If my application is approved, all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the coming academic years.I’ve made a detailed plan to arrange my school life. A part-time job as a family tutor will not be difficult to find and some work-study programs for students like me are also provided in our university. From these sources I will be able to earn more than enough to support myself. I guarantee that I will repay the loan within five years, that is, within two years after my graduation. Please have confidence in me: I have a very good credit record.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. Many thanks.Yours sincerely,......

Dear Sir/Madame, I am a sophomore in Beijing University, majoring in computer science. I am writing to apply for a financial aid for my study in college. I would like to explain more about my situation here. Since I registered here, the expenses have been exerting a negative impact on my study. My mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. It is beyond my parents ability to finance me through my remaining education and the income I make from my part-time jobs is far from sufficient to finance my own tuition fees. Hence, it is essential for me to get a loan of no less than 10,000 yuan. If my application is approved, all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the coming academic year. From the part-time job opportunities offered by programs in my school, I will be able to earn more than enough to cover my daily expenses. I have a very good credit record. In addition, lenovo, a computer company, has shown great interests in a software that I designed and promised me a 5000 Yuan monthly salary to start with if I decide to pursue my career there after graduation. So, I can definitely guarantee a repayment of my loan in the coming three years. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. Many thanks. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

写作思路：围绕“online loan”借贷的中心思想，结合自身感受得描述，正文：

Ever since colleges started to charge the students for the education they receive, there has always been a problem for some students, especially for those from remote rural regions, to get the money for it.

自从大学开始对学生接受的教育收费以来，一些学生，尤其是来自偏远农村地区的学生，一直难以获得这笔钱。

So the government offers them an option of borrowing money from banks. Surveys show that the number of students financing his education in this way is increasing.

因此，政府向他们提供了向银行借钱的选择。调查显示，以这种方式资助他教育的学生人数正在增加。

However, some students, although not many, failed to pay back the loans as they had promised in the contract. The banks have a very hard time coping with this problem. And the government can do nothing effective to help the banks.

然而，一些学生，虽然不多，没有按照他们在合同中承诺的那样偿还贷款。银行很难处理这个问题。政府也无法有效帮助银行。

I think there is more than one reason for this. Dishonesty may be one but not the major one. As is known, we are experiencing a particular phase of economic development where the supply of human resources is much bigger than the demand for it.

我觉得这个原因不止一个。不诚实可能是原因之一，但不是主要原因。众所周知，我们正在经历一个经济发展的特殊阶段，在这个阶段，人力资源的供应远远大于需求。

So many students are not able to find a well-paid job. How can they pay the loans back? To solve this problem, I think the government should make efforts to get the whole economy go smoothly, creating more job opportunities.

所以很多学生找不到高薪工作。他们怎么还贷款？要解决这个问题，我认为政府应该努力让整个经济平稳发展，创造更多的就业机会。