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he "taught" me do not look back or dream about the future

1题目有问题，你的意思应该是一个问句。howwillidealwithmyenglishproblems?2第一句，在problems后加about.3第一段的最后一句时态错误，应该时态是前后一致，wrote改为write.4第二段第三句in改为with。总体上还是不错，意思表达的很清楚。只是需要注意一些细节问题，那样就更好咯！

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“There is a pleasant weekend in my mind . I could not forget it .”－there was，用过去时比较好，I can not forget,不要用虚拟。celebrated －celebrate,前面有to 了， 后面是动词原型given－gaveshe doused the glim －你想说她关灯对吗？就简单的说she turned off the lights"she doused the glim and took out a cake with burning candles and smiled and said to me ”happy birthday!” －太多and 了，而且也不通，和前面分成2句话，She turned off the lights and took out a cake with burning candles. She said "happy birthday " to me with a smile on her face while my parents sang birthday song to me.On the second day,－也可以说 Next day"I thought this weekend I was very weary, but is certainly very joyful."－时态和用词I was very tired this weekend, but it was very joyful.感觉你时态比较欠缺，然后会用些很“深奥”的词。

他吓唬你的啦........... 如果真要的话LuxemburgChina has been in the era of the post-Expo which many people are thinking about the development of the museums and the showing objects.It was reported that the Luxemburg Museum would be moving to the city of Huhan.After reading the news,I was so pleasant that I wrote an article to show my agreement and appreciation.Since China has not so many museums,and ,useums have not become one part of the Chinese people's life,such kind of exhibition should be kept in China.It not only helps the government save money,but also enlarge the horizen of the young people.If I have a chance,I would like to pay a visit there.Hopefully,I can get more knowledge about Luxemburg which I am not familiar with. The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government -has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai. as a host city. will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai. I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai. I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First. I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second. I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third. I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future. 乱写点 The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur government -has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai. as a host city. will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai. I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai. I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First. I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second. I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third. I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future. ..

1．是否使用了正确的语法结构，比方说，动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性（尤其是名词、动词、形容词）、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。2．句式是否有变化（如各种从句的使用、分词结构等）3．使用了一定的词汇量（如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复）4．标点、拼写没有错误。5．在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想，所有扩展句都紧扣主题。6．使用了过渡性词语，因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。7．每一段话都得到充分的展开。8．提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。9．明确的观点。10．每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。