浅夏oo淡忆
第二段最后两句写成However, home cooked meals are healthy while canteen meals are not.第三段 they both very改成they are both very..第三段 is popular around改成are popular with第三段 home cooked meals is make family taste happiness改成home cooked meals are made according to one's taste第三段 home cooked meals evironment....with classmates 改成The place where home cooked meals are served is quiet with families while canteen is always noisy and full of students.第四段太啰嗦，整段改成Thirdly, both home cooked meals and cantenn meals are very cheap. However, compared to the weight of the same course served in home cooked meals and cantenn meals, home cooked meals are heavier最后一段改成 I prefer home made meals to cantenn meals.
blue-taste
机器改英语作文的有一个叫巨酷的吧,之前用过,不过有时候越改分越少,有银子的同学还是找老师改吧,推荐51批改网,有中教和外教在改,之前在上面改过雅思作文,从5分提到6.5,总体还行,小贵
shaaaronzy
My opinions on cheating Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important tools(ways) to judge how the student is(students' study). Who can past (pass)or have a high grade(score) has a great meaning for(has a prosperous future) his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise. (Cheating becomes one way to pass, and much more common today.)There are two groups of the cheating students. The first group wants to experience(try) new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and ( they are )out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, they choose cheating (as a way )to pass the exams. Another group works hard on their study. They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them pass)succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher grade than them. For protecting the fairness (To be fair)between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result but (study itself). In my opinion, cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors(school) must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but the dates of the grades. In this way, I think the fairness will come to us again in the near future.
水蓝冰蓝
括号中是修改后的，主要是一些基本语法，语句还可以进一步润色。Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important （ways） to judge how (do the students master knowledge). Who can （get passed） or have a high （score） has a great meaning for his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise. There are two （kinds） of cheating students. The first kind want to experience new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and (be) out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, （they） choose cheating to pass the exams. (The other kind of students) work hard on their study. They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them to) succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher (score) than them. For protecting the fairness between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result (than) process. In my opinion, cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but (only the scores). In this way, I think the fairness will come again in the near future.
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