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Big SaleA big sale is on the Huaxing Clothes Shop in Beijing .We have lots of chain shops around the country. There are all kinds of clothes, glasses, watches, shoes and hats in our shops. Now everything is half price. When you spend over 500 yuan buying things, you can get a great present.Do not miss so great chance. Welcome to come here and have a look! 试题分析:这是篇命题作文,题中给出了写作的要点信息和要求。在写作时,注意要点的齐全,不能漏掉关键要点。并且注意句子表达的准确和通畅尤其注意主谓一致性,和名词的单复数形式。可适当使用一些连词能增加文章的逻辑。【亮点分析】这篇作文要点齐全,表达准确流利。文中用到了常用了一些表达形式和句子,例如:lots of 许多;around the country全国各地;all kinds of各种各样的;have a look 看一看。There are all kinds of clothes, glasses, watches, shoes and hats in our shops.我们商店有各种各样的衣服,眼镜,手表,鞋子和帽子;句型there be,有……。
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Big salePurpose: just because our emporium has no place to store the new clothes, thus, we hold a “BIG SALE SHOW” for thanking the old customers. Time: June 15th , 2011 to July 15th , 2011. Location: xx emporium in Guangzhou.Clothes : the clothes is in low price and good quality. don’t be afraid to be cheated, because the xx emporium can give the guarantee for all the customers. Ps: there are several cameras in good brand in sale in the same time. So it is the good opportunity for the wise people to buy some thing superior. It is now or never. Please join us.
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