maggiemouse
DearManager,IventuretowritetocomplainaboutthequalityofthedigitalcameraIboughtlastFridayatyourstore.Duringthefivedaysthecamerahasbeeninmypossession,problemshaveemergedoneafteranother.Foronething,thescreenisalwaysblack,makingthecameranodifferentfromatraditionalone.Foranother,thebatteryisdistressingasitsupportsthecamera’soperationforonlytwohours.Therefore,Iwishtodeclarearefund.Iwillappreciateitifmyproblemreceivesdueattention.Yours,LiMing希望对你有帮助其实此类型信注意开头的句子和结尾句的语气中肯最为关键
明明白白我旳心
First and foremost, the food served is not covered and many flies can be seen hovering over the food. This may lead to food poisoning. Moreover, the canteen also serves stale food. Apart from that, the food is also too expensive. A small plate of fried rice costs ten dollars and many poor students cannot afford it. Besides that, the canteen serves the same menu daily. The students are bored with fried rice and fried noodles every day. Another complaint is that the cups and plates are oily and not washed properly. The workers are also not appropriately attired although they have been told to wear aprons and caps. Moreover, these workers are rude to students. They shout at us and use foul language whenever they get angry. They also do not clear the dustbins and rubbish daily. This is very unhygienic. As a result, there is a foul stench whenever we eat in the canteen. (156字)
linalingxj
Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China. But when I wanted to use it, I found that there was something wrong with the quality of the mobile phone. The phone’s ring cant’t work and it also can’t send messages. So I went back to the shop and asked the sales assistant to replace it. Unfortunately, he told me that the products were sold out, so I couldn't have it replaced. As a result of the mobled phone’s new style, there are no spare parts, so it means that the phone also can’t be repaired. I hope that company will replace my mobile phone in time, and the more quickly, the better.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Dear Sir,I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr. 2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P. R. China. There is something wrong with my mobile phone. The mobile phone can’t send messages and it can’t ring if someone calls me. What was worse, this kind of mobile phone has been sold out, so it cannot be changed a new one. This kind of mobile phone is in a new style, so the shop has no spare parts to repair my phone. I was so worried about it. I make a request to your company to change it as soon as possible. I hope you can give me a hand.I am looking forward to receiving your answer. Please give me a letter as soon as you receive my E-mail.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi你可以从中任选一篇！！
