申请培训英语邮件

good afternoon是不需要的~~~~~I would like to know 也可以修改结尾也可以改成: I'm looking forward to your reply."at your convenience."可以不要,这样比较简洁 其他没细看~~~~~~~应该问题不大

因为对你的情况和工作环境，还有涉及到的人之间关系不是非常清楚，我只能按照自己的理解来写的MAIL供你参考.如果对方不是中国人的话，你可以开门见山告诉他你写信的目的。尽量写的简洁一些，用词稍微婉转一些即可。Title: application for a color design trainingDear JamesGood Afternoon!I would like to know if I could apply for a NCS color design training. The training will be held from March 4 to 8, five days and it costs 4800RMB.I feel that this training would be very useful to improve the quality and efficiency of my jobs.So, I hope you could kindly consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply at your convenience.RegardsElla

Dear Thomas,　　I’m so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course in Houston. My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program, during which I made many new friends.　　I used to be shy and un-talkative. When staying with my classmates, I tried to communicate with them in English, but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers, I had a strong willing to practise English, but I wasn’t brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough, your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it. Now, I’m glad to learn you are to organize more training courses, and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing. In short, I’m looking forward to more new things in our future courses. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours sincerely,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Ming