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①The global financial crisis, brewing for a while, really started to show its effects in the middle of 2007 and into 2008. Around the world stock markets have fallen, large financial institutions have collapsed or been bought out, and governments in even the wealthiest nations have had to come up with rescue packages to bail out their financial systems. On the one hand many people are concerned that those responsibilities for the financial problems are the ones being bailed out, while on the other hand, a global financial meltdown will affect the livelihoods of almost everyone in an increasingly inter-connected world. The problem could have been avoided, if ideologues supporting the current economics models weren’t so vocal, influential and inconsiderate of others’ viewpoints and concerns. Every government has already taken different steps to deal with this. People should remain optimistic attitude and believe we have enough resources to face it. Experienced the crisis, our country will be stronger and we will have a brighter future.②Today's college students face choices unheard of years ago. Terms like two way selection, self-employment are not new to them. Many students swarm (蜂拥) into job market or look every talent fair (人才交流会) for potential employers. The concept of selling (推销) oneself rather than hiding oneself is well accepted by students. Hunting a job is no small matter. Instead, it is probably one of the most, if not the most, important decisions any of would-be graduates can make in a lifetime. Therefore, they are very serious and cautious when that time comes. It is something that the society has taught them. As the job market gets shrinking, it has also become a must for undergraduates (在校本科生)to work harder than before to keep their competitive edge (保持竟争地位). More students are engaged in their studies with no distractions (分心，干扰). They are investing today for a promising (大有希望的，前途无量的) tomorrow. ③living conditions of people all over the world would sharply descend as soon as financial crisis breaks out if nothing is done to heal the golobe economic system. the latest one broke out months ago from the US and has been spreading quickly to China, the largest developing country in the world,where thousands of plants along the eastern coastal cities have bankrupted since the crisis broke out.**********************************************************************自认为感觉良好O(∩_∩)O~希望是你所需要的(⊙v⊙)嗯

首先来了解一下英语作文的评分标准各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。C.第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。D.第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。E.第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。F.不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。从上面可以看出英语作文高分的关键因素及高分秘诀：三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)词汇多样性语法复杂性文章连贯性书面表达的五项秘诀：审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀，我们要如何从这些方面入手呢?审题的概念拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。如何审要点?要做到以下两个方面：总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。遣词的注意点不出现语言错误词语和短语搭配适度使用加分词汇避免词语重复

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Shallow view college students（浅析大学生消费观） In the current consumption market, as a special group is receiving more and more attention. Cell phones, Internet, sports, tourism, av equipment are students of consumption. Their younger age, different from other social consumer groups of consumer psychology and behavior. On one hand has strong consumption demand, on the other hand, has obtained the financial independence. Consumer spending power of advanced concepts, the lag and has great influence on them. With this curious, we investigated the students listened, currently the teachers.Results showed that the following reasons for college students have a profound influence on the view.First, family environment for students of consumption "congenital". Family is the basic factors restricting their consumption. Most students from rural areas currently. Rural students would not spend a lot of money to buy a bar of chocolate, biscuit, candy and snacks. A classmate of institute of grammar, told reporters he every month in the consumption of food and supplies, and a small part of life. However, the students from the developed city, in the free allowance is master circumstance, even the remaining money to spend on hair, clothing, accessories, and other items. MP3Second, the consumption of college campus environment. According to the understanding of the ", just past 11 golden weeks, "some travel agency" lovers swims "travel group, a lot of students. Some boys to girls, the pursuit of cosmetics, snacks, flowers as "sociology". In the investigation and discussion, we found that the students love more than 100 - month about spending at least 200 yuan, also has 50 yuan, the highest reach 500 yuan. One of the students of agronomy humorously tells a reporter, dating from the average expenses for the situation had been broken and three kinds, namely, man should take all NanNvFang share and the initiative of all, girls love spending even more than the situation.Internet addiction among is one where money. Some students spend all day in the net cafe, wasting their time and energy, and parents hard-earned money.Third, social environment influence on college students' view. In the interview process, a eppo school students told reporters: "some students fashion and famous, too." compare existing In the seminar, some students, in order to have a phone or a paragraph on the most popular, some classmates to economize, even sacrifice other necessary expenses. Some male classmate to buy a pair of shoes, the female classmate brand in order to buy a set of famous cosmetic or a brand-name clothes at hand to his family, money or borrow money from their classmates, these reflects some students don't know into, and driven them form the vanity of endless themselves. In addition, the male classmate hair, earrings, female students, also make positive modelling teachers and parents worried.College students are the pillars of the construction of the future society, its consumption ideas and directly affected the life character and the influence of the motherland, indirect jiangshan justice. Good training and strengthening consumer habits will get to the school, good shape, and formed the role of school student wind virtuous circle. Therefore, the schools should set students' good consumption psychology and behavior of the cultivation of campus culture construction as an important component. Facing the current as of inviting advertising the snowflake fly to the university campus, teachers and parents have necessary guidance from the side with the correct method, students correct view firmly. College students from his actual consumption of the economic situation, develop simple life style, develop good consumption habits and consumption mentality. 在当前的消费市场中，大学生作为一个特殊的消费群体正受到越来越多的关注。手机、旅游、上网、运动、影音器材都是大学生的消费热点。他们年龄较轻，有着不同于社会其他消费群体的消费心理和行为。一方面有着旺盛的消费需求，另一方面，尚未获得经济上的独立。消费观念的超前和消费实力的滞后，都对他们有很大影响。带着这样的好奇，我们调查了农大的同学，听取了老师们的意见。 调查结果显示，下面几种原因对大学生的消费观有着深刻的影响。 第一，家庭环境对大学生的消费观产生“先天性”的影响。家庭条件是大学生消费的根本制约因素。农大学生大部分来自于农村。农村来的学生不愿花费很多钱去买巧克力、饼干、糖果之类的零食。文法学院的一位同学告诉记者，他每个月的消费大部分用在伙食及学习用品上，还有一小部分是生活用品。但是，来自发达城市的学生，在零用钱掌握比较自由的情况下，甚至会把剩余的钱都花费在发型、服装、饰物和MP3等其它物品上。 第二，校园环境对大学生消费观的影响不可忽略。据了解，刚刚过去的“十一黄金周”，一些旅行社组织的“情侣游”旅行团里，有着不少大学生的身影。一些男生为了追求女生，把化妆品、零食、鲜花当成“攻心”的利器。在调查和讨论会上我们发现，谈恋爱的学生每月大约多支出 100－200 元，最少的也有 50 元左右，最高的达到 500 元。一位农学院的同学幽默地告诉记者，谈恋爱的费用支出一般由男方承担的局面已经完全被打破，而出现三种情况，即男方全部承担、男女方共同承担和女方主动全部承担，女生的恋爱支出甚至有超过男方的情况。 沉迷于网络也是钱财的去向之一。部分学生整日泡在网吧，浪费了自己的时间和精力，还有父母辛苦挣来的血汗钱。 第三，社会环境对大学生消费观的影响。在采访过程中，一位植保学院的同学告诉记者：“部分大学生过分追求时尚和名牌，存在攀比心理。”在讨论会中，一些同学指出，为了拥有一款手机或者换上一款最流行的，有的同学情愿节衣缩食，甚至牺牲其他必要开支。有些男同学为了买一双名牌运动鞋，女同学为了买一套名牌化妆品或者一件名牌衣服，不惜向家人伸手要钱甚至向同学借钱，这些都反映出一些学生不懂得量入而出，虚荣心的驱使使他们形成无休止的攀比心理。除此之外，男同学染发，打耳环，女同学们向明星造型看齐，也令老师和家长们忧心。 大学生是未来社会建设的栋梁，其消费观念的塑造和培养直接地影响其一生品德和行为，间接影响祖国的江山社稷。良好的消费习惯得到培养和加强，会对良好校风的塑造起促进作用，并形成校风助学风的良性循环。因此，学校应该把大学生良好消费心理和行为的培养作为校园文化建设的重要组成部分。面对眼下各种诱人的广告像雪花般飞向大学校园，老师和父母有必要从旁指引，用正确的方法坚定大学生正确的消费观．。在校大学生消费时应从自己实际的经济状况出发，发扬朴素的生活作风，养成好的消费习惯和消费心态。

这里有不同题目的高考满分英语作文，希望能帮助你哦一假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 英语作文网 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 二请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况； (3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. 三健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 四Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep. I’m looking forward to receiving your letter. Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary)五随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。 注意：1. 词数80—100左右。 2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。 参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体 reduce diseases 减少疾病 As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved. Let’s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、开头已为你写好。生词：减轻学习负担---reduce learning loadDear Dick,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.Best wishes,Li Hua环保The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and complicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment. Therefore, We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks. So we will develop and improve a new risk management system and a disaster prevention system to preserve and create the city environment where people feel easy and sound in their life.protection of the environmentonce man did not have to think about the protection of his environment. there were few people on the earth, and natural resources seemed to be unlimited.today things are different. the world has become too crowded. we are using up our natural resources,and polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. if we continue to do this, human life on earth will not survive.we realize that if too many fish are taken from the sea, there will soon be none left. yet,with modern fishing methods, more and more fish are caught.we know that if too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. yet, we continue to use powerful machines to cut down more and more trees. we see that if rivers are polluted with waste products, we will die. yet, waste products arestill put into rivers.we know that if the population continues to rise at the present rate, in a few years, there won’t be enough food.what can we do to solve these problems?if we eat more vegetables and less meat, there will be more food available. land for crops feeds five times more people than land where animals are kept.our natural resources will last longer if we learn to recycie them.the world population will not rise so quickly if people use modern methods of birth control.finally, if we educate people to think about the problems we shall have a better and cleaner planet in the future.1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。 2. 为了保护环境, 3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。 4. 我的看法。 There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities. To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today. In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves. 低碳经济下的环境保护(2) 根据题目《师父被熏晕过去了》的漫画和下面要求写一篇关于河水污染的感想。 1. 情况。2. 原因。3. 后果。4. 措施。 词数 100~120。 One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river. Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed. If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long. 低碳经济下的环境保护(3) 全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重。请你根据漫画内容和下面要求给China Daily写一封信反映这一情况,并提出保护环境的建议。 注意:1.信的开头与结尾已经给出,不计算在总词数内。 2. 字数要求: 120左右。 人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment。 Dear editor, Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. Yours truly Li Hua Dear editor, Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence. We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment. Yours truly Li Hua

Asontoldhisfather,"Dad,I'mabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste".Buthisverysmartfathertoldhim,"Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhereyoucandoanything''Thestorytellsusthat:theimportanceofdoingsmallthingsI'mfromthefather'spointofview.Asandoldsaying:youcannotsweeptheworldbeforeyousweepyouronroom.Ifyoudoanythingsmallwell,youcanimproveyourc0nfidence,andprovethatyouhaveyourabilitiesimproved.Asthesametime,youarereliabledinothers'eyes.Insociety,manypeopledreamtosuccessbyonenight.However,asIknow,thosepeoplewhogotmuchsuccessintheworldcompletelystartingwithsmallthings.Doyouwanttosuccess?Juststartdoingsmallthingsbeforeondertakingsomethingbig.