书画人生
My VacationLast summer I went Beijing on vacation. The weather was sunny and hot. We visited the Great Wall on the first day. There were many people on the Great Wall. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian’an Men Square. We took many photos there. We also visited some other interesting places in Beijng. We visited some Beijing Hutongs , too. We had great fun there. I hope to go there again.
橙橙小狐狸
my trip I went Beijing with my family on last summer vacation . It was sunny and hot.We visited a lot of places,such as the Great Wall and Palace Museum.People there were very friendly.We took many photos.Then we had some other activities there.For example, we went shopping in the afternoon. I felt so happy.I thought Beijing was a beautiful city.This was a great trip!(额。我写得尽量很简单了。初一水平我真的想不太起来了。有你觉得不懂的地方你可以自己改改，或者删了算了。希望可以帮到你。)
小蝴蝶飞不过
Beijing has a long history . There are lots of places of interest .Every year lots of travellers go sightseeing . Last summer holiday , I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents .It took us two hours to go there by plane .As soon as we arrived there ,we went to visit the Palace Museum and Tian’an men Square . The next day we went to the Summer Palace . The view there was very beautiful .We tasted many famous delicious Beijing foods . such as Beijing Duck .I also bought some souvenirs for my friends .Although we felt very tired ,we enjoyed ourselves very much . I hope to visit Beijing again very soon.
金色年华119
范文：Today is Sunday and it is a fine day.My friend and I took a trip to the zoo in our city.Early in the moring,we met at the school gate and started off at about 8:00am.We went by bus and got to the zoo at about 8:30.
There were many people in the zoo,men and women,boys and girls were everywhere.We went to the monkey hills to watch the monkeys first.
They were very cute,jumping here and there.Then we went to see the elepants.There were several elephants,and all are very big,lying on the ground.Later we saw some tigers that are very violent with a very big mouth.
今天是星期天，天气很好。我和我的朋友去了我们城市的动物园。一大早，我们在学校门口见面，大约早上8点出发。我们坐公共汽车，大约8点30分到达动物园。
动物园里有很多人，男人和女人，到处都是男孩和女孩。我们先去猴山看猴子。它们很可爱，到处跳。然后我们去看大象。有几头大象，都很大，躺在地上。后来我们看到一些老虎，它们非常凶猛，嘴巴很大。
英语翻译技巧：
第一、省略翻译法
这与最开始提到的增译法相反，就是要求你把不符合汉语，或者英语的表达的方式、思维的习惯或者语言的习惯的部分删去，以免使所翻译出的句子沉杂累赘。
第二、合并法
合并翻译法就是把多个短句子或者简单句合并到一起，形成一个复合句或者说复杂句，多出现在汉译英的题目里出现，比如最后会翻译成定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等等。
rachelliu1
写作思路：根据题目要求，介绍旅游时的经历，最后总结自己的感受。
Last year, I went to Beijing by train. I run fast.
去年，我乘火车去了北京。我跑得很快。
However, I like traveling by train because I like the feeling on the train.
但是，我喜欢坐火车旅行，因为我喜欢在火车上的感觉。
In addition, I can enjoy the scenery along the way.
此外，我还可以欣赏沿途的风景。
However, after last week's trip, I don't want to travel by train anymore, because I'm too tired and have no fun. I spent 16 hours on the train.
然而，在上周的旅行之后，我不想再坐火车旅行了，因为太累了，没有乐趣。我在火车上花了16个小时。
I'm so tired that I have to spend a day having a good rest. It's boring on the train. Therefore, I don't think we should take the train if the journey is far away.
我很累，不得不花一天时间好好休息。在火车上很无聊。因此，我认为如果路途遥远，就不应该坐火车。
clover2011
I went to Beidaihe with my parents last Sunday. It was a sunny day. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived there, there were thousand of people. We walked on the beach for about two hours and picked up lots of beautiful shells. We also went boating and fishing. At noon we ate delicious sea food. We also took lots of pictures. It was really a wonderful day. We really had a good time.祝你学习进步，更上一层楼，快乐每一天！(*^__^*)
