Sally-yiner
Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.上个暑假,我和我的家人坐火车去了青岛。那里总是阳光明媚,空气也很清新,令人心情舒畅。我们去了海边,海水和天空一样的蓝,在沙滩上沐浴着阳光,是件很享受的事儿。我和妹妹还捡了好多五颜六色的贝壳。我们在这里买了好多有趣的纪念品,我打算送给我的朋友们。我们在这里吃到了很多东西,比如鱼,虾..真的很美味。 我们住在一个干净整洁的旅馆里,而且价格不是很昂贵。 我很喜欢这里,如果有机会我还希望可以再次去青岛,这个美丽有趣的地方。
请叫我姚锅
先列一个大纲,很简单:这种一般符合五W写法,Where.When.Who.Why.What?1、去哪旅游,什么时间,跟谁一起。Where?When?Who?例句:This weekend,I will travel to Beijing with my family.这周末,我准备和家人一起去北京旅游。2、为什么来这里,这里有什么。Why? What?Beijing have a lot of travel site ,such as the Great Wall and the Palace Museum.北京有很多旅游景点,例如长城和故宫。We want to visit some historical sites,so we choose the Palace Museum .我们想游览一些人历史古迹,所以我们选择了故宫。Ba cause the Forbidden City has a collection of antiques and a number of ancient buildings.因为故宫里有很多文物和许多古代建筑。(补充说明一下:the forbidden city—紫禁城—是故宫的另一种英语表达。)3、补充一些其他方面的东西。比如说,听说这边有很多美食,或者听说这里的人热情好客,或者旅游当天这里天气怎样。主要是为了丰富这个旅游景点的立体感。例: There will be a fine day when we arrival Beijing,so we have enough time to visit it. 我们到达北京那天将会是一个好天气,这样我们就有足够的时间游览它。4、结语如果是计划,还未出发,可以写期待这是一次开心的旅行。如果已经游览过,可以写,这是一次终身难忘的经历。例:We hope this travel will be a wonderful experience.我们希望这次旅行将会是一次美好的经历。以上就是我的回答,希望能够帮到您,望采纳!
笑傲江湖之悟空
作文1: (时间顺序+过去时+细节描述+感受)
I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-dayholiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It’s the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought (定从)are all white because white is my favorite color. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn’t forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.
作文2:(过去时+表示感受的形容词)
Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train. There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable(定从). We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing(沐浴) in the sunshine on the beach was really an enjoyable thing. I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister. There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planning to send them to my friends. We ate many things there,such as fish,prawn,and so on. They are very delicious. Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive. I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.
作文3: (时间顺序+过去时+细节描述+形容词的感受)
Last month, I had a trip to Beijing with my family. It was really an impressive trip(令人印象深刻得旅行). We all had a good time there.At first, we wanted to go there by plane, but the plane tickets were so expensive, so we chose the high-speed train at last. It took us about 8 hours to get there. When we arrived at Beijing railway station, we were so tired that we took a taxi to a hotel. And we planed to begin our trip the next day.On the first day, we got up at 2:30 a.m. to see the flag-raising ceremony. When we arrived at Tianan’men Square, there were already a lot of people. When the flag-raising ceremony began, people all made a video excitedly. The flag-raising ceremony lasted(持续) only a few minutes. And then we went to visit the Great Wall. It was so long and steep. we took many pictures and we enjoyed delicious Beijing Duck at a local restaurant that night.Do you know Niaochao? Our national stadium. It was very big and famous. The building was built in 2003 and finished at 2008. Its shape was very peculiar(不寻常的). We took some pictures there on the second day.On the third day, we went to see the Tsinghua University ----a dream school of most Chinese students. One day, I want to study at Tsinghua University too.
作文4: A trip to Beijing(过去时+细节描述)
July 14th, 2006 was a very special day for me. I went to Beijing by train on that day. I was very happy because I would see the capital of China---Beijing, a really great city in China!Beijing is one of the biggest cities in China. There are lots of places of interest(名胜), such as the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace, and the Great Wall·····Lots of visitors from different countries come to Beijing every year.I stayed in Beijing for three days. During these days, I visited many good places. When I was in the Palace Museum, I really didn't know the directions(方向). It is very large. People will spend four hours if they want to travel around it. All the things in it are very nice. Although they were made more than 500 years ago, they look very beautiful. When we were in Taipei Palace, we saw a special chair. It was for the emperor and it was made of gold. Each of the visitors said that it is really nice after they visited the Palace Museum.When we went to the Great Wall, I was very excited because it is the most famous place of interest(名胜古迹) in China. On the way to the top of the Great Wall, I ran very fast all the time. When I was at the top of the Great Wall, I thought I was a hero!Three days is too short for me. Beijing is a very good and modern city. I want to make it more and more beautiful. I should work hard. I believe Beijing will be the best in the future.
duxingdejimi
I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day,and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow.I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to beijing!
我听说丽江是一个非常美丽的城市,当我小的时候。我和我父母在假期了那里。我坐飞机去的。我看到有许多山当我下了飞机。空气很新鲜,我们去了谷城丽江的第一天,我们买了一些有趣的东西,在谷城丽江吃了一顿好饭。第二天,我们去了玉龙雪山山,它是美丽的,这是我第一次见到雪。我快乐地玩雪。我的父亲告诉我玉龙雪山是中国著名的地方,许多人每年都来这里。我在这次旅行中很开心,因为它甚至比北京更好!
有星星的夜
关于旅行的英语作文5句话:
I go to a interesting place,there are lots of peopel.I see many beautiful flowers,and there are many animals.I see some tigers,they are very scary.I also see two elephints,they are petty heavy and big.
译文:我去了一个有趣的地方,那里有很多人。我看到许多美丽的花,那里还有许多动物。我看到一些老虎,它们非常可怕。我还看到两只大象,它们又小又重又大。
写英语作文的注意事项
1、要增加闪光点,但是请注意:就算考生在作文中设置了语言亮点,也并不意味着一定会被“伯乐”发掘。阅卷速度很快,阅卷老师根本没时间去"解构"过于复杂的倒装句、从句套从句。但是语法、拼写错误太多,会使一切语言点失效。没有人会相信错误连篇的人有能力使用高难句型。
2、视觉评判:干净整洁、字迹漂亮。养成良好的习惯。写字太难看、卷面混乱会使一切语言亮点失效。没有人会相信几乎从不写英文字的人有能力设置英语的语言亮点。
3、不要直接套用万能模板。考研作文阅卷,事实上是一个反模板化的过程。阅卷人读了很多毫无个性、高度雷同的模板作文,脑子里会形成一中反模板化的情结:生搬硬套的模板句,哪怕包装得再华丽,也不会多看一眼;原创而切题的句子,哪怕朴实一点,也能够令考官感动。
程Celeste
(1) I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn't move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area. Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water,and ate some food.After a while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain. (2) England is the best place I’ve ever been.Everything is so beautiful.I spent about one and a half days on the plane.When I arrived at Heathrow Airport in London,it was evening and the GREat trip was starting.there were many places I v is ited in London,like Big Ben,Westminster,the Tower of London…….those are very famous.Most of the time in the afternoon,my parents and I sat and walked in the park.Have you seen“Notting Hill”before?the story in the movie happens in London.the Brit is h museum,Musee de Louver and the Metropolitan Museum of art are the three largest museums in the world.I’ve v is ited two of them.then we left London for Cambridge,Windsor Castle,York and Stonehenge.they were excellent .Every small town has a h is tory of one or two thousand years.there was an art festival called“Tutto”in Edinburgh,and there were many street players who their lives to the shows.then we went to northern Scotland.It was dangerous!then we went back to London,and sat in the park,and the fat geese were so cute.That journey was the nicest memory of my life.I won’t forget it. (3) My Summer Trip I went to three cities to play during last summer holidays.They are Beijing,Dalian and HuHehot. I went to Beijing more than eight times.Beijing is the capital of China.It’s a big city.I am very familiar with Beijing.It takes an hour and forty minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane.There are many tall buildings in Beijing.It’s a modern city.My family visited the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,the Palace Museum,the Beihai Park,the Space Museum,etc.I went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing.It was very interesting.I went shopping in WangFuJing.I bought lots of souvenirs and other things.I like eating Beijing snacks.They are delicious.Don’t miss the Beijing Duck.It is really nice. Dalian is a beautiful city.Dalian is close to Beijing.I spent 5o minutes on the plane.Dalian is near the sea.I smelled the salty taste in the air.The roads are clean.There are lots of trees and flowers near the roads.There are many esplanades and Japanese buildings.There are some fountains in one of the esplanades.Some people flew kites and walked on the esplanades.We went to see the beach and the sea.The sea is blue.There were many swimmers in the sea.I lay on the beach to see the sky.Dalian is a very nice place to live. Huhehot is in Inner Mongol.There are lots of large grasslands.The grasslands are endless.The sky is bright blue.There were a lot of horses and sheep.They were running or eating grass.I rode a horse on the grass land.I picked some colourful flowers.We drank the tea with milk.There is a small desert,it was very hot when I walked on it.The sand could sing. These trips helped me open my eyes.I enjoyed my day.