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题目：阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 1 Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. "By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them. 2 Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments. 3 So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. "We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters. 4 Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into It. 我：本次概要写作文章脉络清晰，一段一要点，属于常规概要写作。以下提供的是我的读写思路：在主题语境下，注重句与句之间的逻辑分析，注重慢读细读读透，以期写的时候水到渠成。 本期侧重如何提取主题句（因为这个是首要的），提供了详细的解析与习作等，仅供参考。在写的环节，省去了同义替换等具体解说，请读者自行体会，最后还附上了Tom、陈圣林与李浩等老师的下水作文。感谢无私分享！ 由于时间仓促，如有疏漏，敬请批评指正。文章体裁：议论文 文章大意：父母对孩子的表扬过多过少都会带来不好的后果，恰当的表扬应着重表扬孩子做事过程中的努力而非结果。 每段大意： 1. 现在的父母表扬孩子过多，会带来负面的影响，如孩子害怕尝试新事物或者害怕达不到父母的高期待等。 2. 过少的表扬也是有害的，会让孩子觉得自己不好，没有得到父母的关心或觉得自己的努力没有意义。 3. 正确的方式应该是注重赞美的质量而不是数量，注重孩子努力的过程而非结果 。 4. 表扬要适当，要根据实际情况。 写作的步骤与策略： 第一步：通读全文 通读全文，关注到文章的体裁；关注到不断反复出现的词：praise ，（主题）关注到文章的谋篇：先讲表扬过多不好，再讲表扬过少也不好，然后提出怎样表扬才算好，最后来一个总结。 第二步：逐句逐段解读并用自己的话表达 第一段 Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says,“ We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. "By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire（事与愿违） and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them. 阅读策略： 看完每个段落，问自己：这一段讲了什么呢？传递了什么主要信息，统领的信息是什么，支撑信息是哪些？然后暂定主题句，在之后的阅读中不断理解与修正（以下每一个段落都这样问问自己）逐句解析： 第一句话表示了存在的社会现状：Parents everywhere praise their kids. 第二句话：Jenn Berman提出了以前父母对孩子要求过于严格，但现在走到了反面。对于第一句传达的信息进行了修正。 Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “ We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict. " 第三句话给出了作者的观点：父母认为给孩子很多表扬是构建他们的自信，事实上可能情况相反: By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they're building their children’s confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. 第四句话: 是对第三句话中the opposite的具体解析。为何情况相反呢？作者给出了假设与说明，作为支撑信息: Too much praise can backfire（事与愿违） and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them. 由此，第一句与第二句可以看作是导入：父母到处表扬孩子，Jenn Berman提出了以前父母对孩子要求过于严格，但现在走到了反面。 第三句作者提出了自己的观点：父母认为给孩子很多表扬是构建他们的自信，事实上可能情况相反。 第四句对第三句再解释。太多的表扬会让孩子由于害怕不能与表扬相匹配，不敢尝试新事物。 因此，暂定主题句第三句，可统领其他几句。 自己的话表达：(叙述角度的不同会带来细微的差别) Nowadays, parents praise children too much, which may result in children’s lack of confidence in challenging. Parents believe praising can help boost children's confidence while too much praise may result in opposite effects. 第二段： 2 Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments. 第一句：不要走另一个极端。Still, don't go too far in the other direction. 第二句：不给足够的表扬与给的表扬太多同样有害。Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. 第三句：孩子会认为他们不够优秀或者你不关心他们，他们看不到努力获取成就的意义。Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments. 第一句给出观点，不要走另一个极端：表扬太少。第二句提出作者观点，表扬太少有害。第三句作为第二句的解释，说明具体是怎样的害处。自己的话表达：Kids may feel discouraged when not given enough praise. The shortage of praising will trigger negative effects. Inadequate praise can discourage them , and their endeavor is meaningless. 第三段： 3 So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. "We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal, "says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters. 第一句：怎样的表扬才是合适的？So what is the right amount of praise? 第二句：专家们说表扬的质量比数量更重要。Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. 第三句：假如表扬是真诚的，关注于努力而不是结果，在孩子做了值得表扬的事情的时候尽可能多地表扬。 If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. 第四句：Donahue说，我们应该认可孩子尽力去达到目标所付出的努力。是过程而不是结果真正要紧。recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal； it's the process not the end product that matters. 自己的话表达： According to experts, it is the quality of praise rather than quantity that matters, which shows parents' sincerity and concentration on process instead of focusing on the outcome. Experts say the quality of praise outweighs the quantity, which means what should be stressed are the process and effort. 第四段： 4 Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into It. 第一句：你儿子可能不是队里最好的篮球运动员。Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. 第二句：但是假如他每天在外打球很努力，不管他的团队输还是赢，都应该表扬他的努力。But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. 第三句：表扬努力的过程而不是结果也意味着当他们在努力地清扫庭院、烧饭菜完成读书笔记的时候你都是认可你的孩子的。Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. 第四句：不管是什么，表扬应该基于个案，与孩子投入的努力相称。 But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into It. 第一第二第三句的举例都为了表达我们要表扬孩子努力的过程而不是结果。第四句提出父母要怎样的表扬。自己的话表达：Parents are expected to praise kids on a reasonable basis in accordance with kids' amount of effort.Praise is supposed to be in line with actual cases and proportional efforts your child has made. 第三步: 整合成文 （请注意衔接等） 下水作文一：Tom 老师 Parents believe praising can help boost children's confidence while too much praise may result in opposite effects. However, inadequate praise can discourage them , and their endeavor is meaningless. According to experts, it is the quality of praise rather than quantity that matters, which shows parents' sincerity and concentration on process instead of focusing on the outcome. In fact, praise is supposed to be in line with actual cases and proportional efforts the children have made. ( 76 words) 陈圣林老师： Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerable praise to their children, hoping to boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect. However, no praise from parents also does harm to their self-confidence. Therefore, experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the result. Meanwhile, kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty. Anyway, the amount of praise you have depends on how hard they work （72 words）李浩老师: Parents praise their children to promote their confidence, but the overpraise may lead to an opposite effect. （要点1）However, inadequate praise is also harmful as it drives kids to lose motivation.（要点2）Actually, what really matters is the quality of praise, which should be sincere and concentrate on process rather than result.（要点3）Praise offers encouragement and recognition, while it should base on the fact and correspond with the effort.（要点4）（66 words）
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2019成人高考专升本英语作文范文：
1.环境保护：
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One o the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil.
The polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What’s more, vegetation has been greatly reduced with rapid growth of modern cities.
To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution.
Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environment protection today.
In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environment protection through education.
Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population. Finally’ those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished.
We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
2.低碳生活：
In recent years, due to the country to promote low-carbon living, now the city has many people usually go out no more cars, but with the bike, and some people just walk.
Also, in the summer, people a few years ago still use air conditioning. Later, some people learn the low carbon life, no longer open air conditioning, but with less power of the electric fan, now, people have even the fans are no longer in use, but with the fan.
Now, our family life is the lowest carbon water, we pool water, has now become a bucket. The pond water will flow into the bucket. Buckets of water to flush the toilet, take a shower of water of our home is generally used to flush the toilet.
Washing machine is the same water.
Low carbon life.
3.旅游和垃圾：
Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it.
First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so satisfying.
For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures.
In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting environment.
In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment.
People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.
扩展资料：
统招与成考区别：
统招专升本难就难在考试录取上。
只要考上，几乎都能拿到本科证和学士学位证。从国家、从学校、从学生本人角度看来，举办统招专升本是解决专科生现实社会问题的一个理想的途径，专科同学一般都想上本科学校的，不愿就停留在专科层次上，每年都想报的人很多，竞争很激烈，希望想要专升本的朋友们要提前作好准备。
成人专升本是指专科毕业后，离开学校后，参加全国统一的成人考试，每年与成人高考同时报名考试，最后颁发的学历是成人本科学历（有学位）。 毕业证盖所学习高校章，证书上显示“成人教育脱产或函授”字样，国家承认，通常认为同等情况下，社会认可度低于普高本科甚至自考本科。
两者不同在于：统招专升本的学历是普通高校，第一学历是本科。成人的专升本的学历是成人。但是统招专升本一般仅限在原地区范围内，专业必须对口，学校的选择很少；成人专升本则可以选择原专科不同的专业，学校范围可遍布全国各地，最后也有学位，可以考研。
参考资料来源：百度百科--专升本考试
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