短文改错英语吧

Attention please, everyone!Anout fifty students from America will come to our school for a visit on October 4th, Sunday. Our class will greet them. We will meet at the school gate at 8:40am and give them a warm welcome. They will arrive at 9am, and then we will show them our schoolyard, the lab building and the teaching builing. There will be a friendly basketball game on the playground at 10am. We will leave our school at 11am. We should be pilite to our guests and talk with them in English. That's all. Thank you.

As a shy girl, I never thought of doing such kind （of） things in public.I final(finally) stood before the micriphone in face of the great number of students.

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1.One day,Tom said to one of his [friends] ,"I am going 2.to have [a] holiday in Beijing. But I can't speak Chinese . 3.I will go to evening-class to learn [Chinese] for one4. month before I go to Beijing."5.Tom [studied hard very much ]in the month. 6.And then his hoilday [began]. 7.After a few [weeks] , Tom came back. 8.His friend asked [him],"did you have any trouble 9.in Chinese when you are in beijing ,Tom ?" 10."No,I didn"t have any trouble with it.But Chinese did!"

1.our healthy改为our health2.we must take action to changing it.改为we must take action to chang it3.Believeit or not,the speech ultimately end with a great success.ends一些单词打错了以外,应该没错的了!

such kind ofanyway,i finally stood towards the microphone in front of the .......a great deal of times(many)to my big embarrassmenti forgot allalmost burst into cry at the momentcalm(put) myself downthe speech finnaly(eventually) end with(in) a....i like fruit and vegetablesare of great benefit to my healthprevent us from getting sickhelp us to(by) losing weight(to is an conjunction here)i gradually quit the bad habitas an old saying goes (that)still many chidren who dislike。。。。。 and regardlessly accept some harmful advertisement,they are getting weaker and weaker other than stronger.in my opinion ,it is time for us to take actions against it.

Dear John, I'm writing to tell you about my English. Over these years I have learned approximate 3500 English words. I can read some English books and write short essays in simple English, but I have difficulty to communicate with others .I can't catch the teacher when he speaks fast, therefore, I cannot get myself over when I speak to others. I know it is important for us to learn a foreign language well, so I determined to work harder at English and do more practices. Now I hope you can offer me some advices on how to improve my English. I would like to know your opinions.楼主的这篇看上去像自己写的，那么我的意见是学好英语，首先是单词要掌握，然后是语法。加上不懈的锻炼 （读 说 写）就能很快提高英语水平。通过大量阅读，掌握语感和词汇，然后自己写，写完检查，修改来提高语法水平。逐渐的，开口说也就不是难事了。Dear JohnI am writing regarding my English learning. In past years I have learned approximate 3500 words and so so far I can read some propaedeutic English articals and write some short essays. But communicating with others face to face is still a problem for me. I found difficulties to catch teachers whom speak fast and when I spoke to others, I felt not easy. I know it is important for our generation to learn a foreign language, therefore, I will work hard on English learnin and to do more practices. Would you please offer me some suggestions on how to improve oral English.Looking forward to hear from you.All the best!

第一行，过往经历应该用复数吧。第三行，expressitclearlyinEnglish第四行，study应该是不及物动词，应该改为learned，把time去掉。hardly意思是几乎不，不是刻苦。第五行，Englishspokenbeabletodo我只能找出这些。还有就是你的英文过于中国化，建议你多读英文文章，找找感觉，积累词汇，多说，多写。加油吧！

1one day,Tom said to one of his friends ."I am going本句要点：1、人名首字母要大写2、one of his friends他的朋友之一，就是很多朋友里面的一个。很多朋友当然要用复数2.to spend my holiday in Beijing. but I don't speak Chinese .本句要点：1、地名、语言（国家）名首字母大写2、在某地度过我的假期：固定用法spend my holiday in……,注意不能用have，一定要写明“我”的假期 3.I will go to evening classes to learn Chinese for a本句要点：1、明明是说他不会汉语，怎么又学英语呢？应该是学汉语才对！2、去上课，一定不止一节课，所以要用复数，像这种要格外注意 4. month before I go to Beijing.'本句要点：1、学习汉语是在去北京之前，之前用before，之后才是after5.Tom studied very hard for a month. 本句要点：1、学习study拼写错误，过去式studied 2、（一个）月：month不是mouth（嘴巴）6.And then his hoilday began.本句要点：1、全文都在叙述过去的事情，所以除了对话当中，其余动词都要用过去时，这里的（假期）开始也一样：began 7.after a few weeks, Tom came back.本句要点：1、几个月，用复数 8.His friend asked him,"Did you have any trouble 本句要点：1、Tom是男的，怎么用her了呢？2、句子的第一个字母大写9.in your chinese when in Beijing ,Tom ?"本句要点：1、遇到问题是在“你的汉语”方面，你的your，不是you（你） 10."No,I didn"t have trouble with it.but the Chinese did!"本句要点：1、中国人，表示一个群体通常用the加上相应的词：例如：中国人：the Chinese穷人：the poor老人：the old