苏明zhsm13579
I am glad to share my methodes in learning English with enerybody.I am a professional basketball player and I study English in my part time.My learning was starting at 2002,then I passed PETS3 at 2005.Last year I failed the PETS4 with one point under the line.In learning English,at first,you need to ask yourself why do I study English and what is my goal.My goal is to be a international basketball referee after my player career.Nobody can plays it for ever.I believe that the opportunity is open to those well prepared for it.
孩子的笑
1. i have read magazine advertisement knowing you are hurting for somebody who can become your pen-friends.这句改为I know that from magazine advertisements that you are hurting for somebody who can become your pen-friends.会更地道一些，也更简洁其他的都还可以，语法的问题没有发现，如果作文有10分得个78分没问题
33人见人爱
I am glad to share my methodes in learning English with enerybody.I am a professional basketball player and I study English in my part time.My learning was starting at 2002,then I passed PETS3 at 2005.Last year I failed the PETS4 with one point under the line.In learning English,at first,you need to ask yourself why do I study English and what is my goal.My goal is to be a international basketball referee after my player career.Nobody can plays it for ever.I believe that the opportunity is open to those well prepared for it.Sencond,choose realistic detailed goals in your daily life and contact your interests on the English.Reading English book and listening English songs or watching English TV series are efficient ways.There shouldn’t be one way to learn English,but you should find one which suits you.Don’t try to do more than you can.Decide how hard you can work and what you can do.Making the English to be a part of your daily life and have fun in learning English.
