shangna52088
写作思路：首先先写我对农场的态度，然后再写农场你的动物和植物，最后进行总结表态。
范文：
I love my farm. It is really beautiful and if you ever go there you will love it like I do. Every time I go to my lovely farm I feed the curious chickens, and I normally see big fluffy rabbits sitting quietly in the corner, chewing on grass.
我爱我的农场。它真的很美，如果你去那里，你会像我一样喜欢它。每次我去我可爱的农场，我都会喂那些好奇的小鸡，我通常会看到毛茸茸的大兔子安静地坐在角落里，嚼着青草。
last year we opened a Cellar Door (winery), so know i get to plat yards and yards of grapes in my farm, so i can make the finest wine in the whole world.
去年我们开了一个酒窖，所以我知道我可以在我的农场里种上一畦又一畦的葡萄，所以我可以酿出世界上最好的葡萄酒。
I love going to other places, but my farm is my favourite!
我喜欢去其他地方，但我的农场是我最喜欢的！
官官8809
写作思路：确立中心，围绕选材，确定重点，安排详略，选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想，选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料，以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来，具体如下：
This is my farm.It is not very big,but it’s beautiful.On my farm,there are many animals living their happy life.In the middle,there is a pond.A fountain is in the pond.Near the pond,there are some flowers blossoming.On the right,there are some dogs,pigs,fish,sheep and cows.
They are not very lovly.Ob the left,there are some donkeys,cats,ducks,hens,and horses.Near the horses is my house.In front of my house,there is another small house.There are some tomatoes,carrots ,hay,corn,and grass covering on it.Do you like my farm?
这是我的农场。它不是很大，但它很漂亮。在我的农场里，有许多动物过着快乐的生活。在中间，有一个池塘。池塘里有个喷泉。在池塘附近，一些花正在盛开。
在右边，有一些狗，猪，鱼，羊和牛。他们不是很可爱。左边是一些驴、猫、鸭子、母鸡和马。马旁边是我家。在我的房子前面，有另一个小房子。上面有一些西红柿、胡萝卜、干草、玉米和草。你喜欢我的农场吗？
金夫人照相馆
This is my farm. It is not very big, but it’s beautiful. On my farm, there are many animals living their happy life.In the middle, there is a pond. A fountain is in the pond. Near the pond, there are some flowers blossoming. On the right, there are some dogs, pigs, fish, sheep and cows. They are not very lovly.Ob the left, there are some donkeys, cats, ducks, hens, and horses. Near the horses is my house. In front of my house, there is another small house. There are some tomatoes，carrots ，hay， corn, and grass covering on it.Do you like my farm?
AstrophelandStella
This is my farm. It is not very big, but it’s beautiful. On my farm, there are many animals living their happy life.In the middle, there is a pond. A fountain is in the pond. Near the pond, there are some flowers blossoming. On the right, there are some dogs, pigs, fish, sheep and cows. They are not very lovly.Ob the left, there are some donkeys, cats, ducks, hens, and horses. Near the horses is my house. In front of my house, there is another small house. There are some tomatoes，carrots ，hay， corn, and grass covering on it.
angelabaobao
my farmMy farm is very big.There are some fruit trees and some colorful flowers on my farm.You can pick some apples or oranges from the tree if you want.And there are some geese on the river.We also have some cows and goats.I often cut grass to feed the cows and sheep.I love my farm.
